I'M NOT WILLING TO LET YOU GO

i wrote this poem for my girlfriend because she was upset and it really cheered her up so here it is

I love you so much I really do

I just can't wait to hug and kiss you

I just want to hold you so tight

I really want to do it on this one cold night

My love for you is strong as strong can be

And when you're away from me, I'm not stopping you from being free

I'm so glad you came along

Being in each others arms is exactly where we belong

I know that we can stop our fights

I just bring up the wrong things on the wrong nights

I shouldn't of put you down and i'm sorry

I am never going to leave you so don't worry

Just because I talk bout it I don't actually mean it you know

Because deep down I will never let you go

So I love you babe with all my heart

I'm sorry for tonight, I don't want anything to break us apart

Reviews

[Johanna]

I really liked this poem! Especially this part: "I know that we can stop our fights
I just bring up the wrong things on the wrong nights.." and the senteces after gives the poem a new kind of life and freshness, it´s not the same to many I´ve read before. Really nice!

[mark]

thank you very much :) i cant believe how i can just put my feelings into words like that :)

[annabellee]

No wonder it cheered her up, that's such a good and sweet poem.
Good flow and just lovely :)

[mark]

hehe thanks it cheered her up heaps.
I didn't think it would.

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[MikeV]

Nice poem, i hope you guys worked things out :)

[mark]

thanks man.
this was an older one but thanks anyway :)

[The Girl That Let You G..]

This is so darn sweet and cute of you! Your girlfriend is a lucky person :D Love the flow and deepth to this write. Great job!

[mark]

thank you very much :) had to cheer her up hehe :)

[The Girl That Let You Go]

Pleasure...Glad you cheered her up ^.^

[mark]

i'm glad it did too :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

i know im lucky trust me :) mark is amazing :)
pssst wuv u babe :)

[mark]

aww thanks babe i love u too :)

[De 'Anthony Subban II]

i like your word choice

[mark]

thanks mate :) i thought of it in 5 mins

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Ur a sweetheart babe i can never stay angry and upset at u especally after you write me poems like that. You really are a great writer u dont relise how good u really are i loved it and it puts a smile on my face reading that i love poems that are written about me its so sweet and you really have sweept me off my feet :P

[mark]

thanks babe :) im just not as good as you are but i guess im alright especially that one i felt bad for putting u down so i had to cheer you up and im glad it did. i love writing poems to you i smile the whole time im doing it

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

writing can really get u thing and it gets ur feelings out in a much beter way im glad u enjoy writing them. Ur beter then alright u really are a great writer hun.

[mark]

awwww thanks sweetie :) i dont mind writing them :)