IT'S IN YOUR EYES

IT'S IN YOUR EYES

A Poem by mark

It's the look in your eyes,
That makes it harder to let you go.
You are my biggest surprise,
This is what you need to know.

When its always fight after fight,
We get upset way too much.
I can never end the night,
Without your hugs, your kisses, your touch.

It's the look in your eyes,
That definitely makes me realize,
That having you is my biggest prize.
Sometimes it's still a big surprise.

It's the look in your eyes,
That makes everything okay.
It's the look in your eyes,
That makes me want to stay.

Your smile on that video today,
Just made me love you more.
I just want to say,
Sorry i stormed out the bus door.

It's your eyes i like looking into,
It helps me forget what we have been through.
You really have no clue,
Just how much i really love you.

It's the cute look in your eyes,
I like to see when you sleep.
It's the look in your eyes,
That says you're the one i must keep.

You seriously don't understand,
How happy your smile makes me.
Now we can take each others hand,
And together we can be free.



© 2013 mark



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i love this one babe the title is great but you will never beat the title of from the heart that was a great title :)
I love you so much im so lucky to have a guy whos so sweet and writes me cute poems, Your so romantic loving and sweet.
Im also sorry if i sometimes take you for granted or don't tell you how amazing you are more often.
Any girl would be so lucky to have you.
Now your my b***h though so they lost there chance when they turned you down they lost someone amazing. No other guy will ever give them or treat them as well as you treat me :)
I love you so much mwa xxxooo
p.s: thank you for entering my life :) but you should know i closed down the exit guess your stuck wid me :P

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mark

4 Years Ago

awww thanks babe :) yeah that was a good title idk how i came up with it :P
i love you too and.. read more



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The eyes, windows to the soul
very great write! :) the love you two express
to one another is awesome keep it up :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


mark

4 Years Ago

thanks allot mate :)
we will :)
"And together we can be free"
I loved this line, just like I loved the entire poem, so sweet and honest.
Well done :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


mark

4 Years Ago

yeah i like that line i like how i ended it like that
thanks so much annabelle :)
annabellee

4 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)
That was toooooo beautiful! It flowed perfectly and the power and passion in your words shone through. probably the best poem i've ever read on this site, just brilliant!

Posted 4 Years Ago


mark

4 Years Ago

wow thanks very much mate. really? the best one u read? my other ones r better than that lol. thanks.. read more
Shanil Mehdi

4 Years Ago

well i haven't read your others but i'll take a look at them and see for myself. :P keep up the good.. read more
mark

4 Years Ago

thanks allot man
i love this one babe the title is great but you will never beat the title of from the heart that was a great title :)
I love you so much im so lucky to have a guy whos so sweet and writes me cute poems, Your so romantic loving and sweet.
Im also sorry if i sometimes take you for granted or don't tell you how amazing you are more often.
Any girl would be so lucky to have you.
Now your my b***h though so they lost there chance when they turned you down they lost someone amazing. No other guy will ever give them or treat them as well as you treat me :)
I love you so much mwa xxxooo
p.s: thank you for entering my life :) but you should know i closed down the exit guess your stuck wid me :P

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mark

4 Years Ago

awww thanks babe :) yeah that was a good title idk how i came up with it :P
i love you too and.. read more

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hey i'm mark. I am a really friendly person I get along with almost anybody. I have an amazing girlfriend that I love so much, I never want to lose her. I have just started getting into writing poems... more..

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