~*~Kiss Me~*~

The kind of kiss I've always wanted. ~smile~ This is part of a story I've been working on, I'm hoping to post it some time in the coming couple of weeks. Until then... let it just be a kiss.

"Kiss me."  

 

It was a volley of whispers, of promises and golden tomorrows.

 

"Kiss me."

 

It was a plea, a bargain, a begging of childhood dreams wrapped around one heart-wrenching prayer.

 

"Kiss me."

 

It was a keening sound, barely fluttering low in your throat then soaring out past your lips like a banshee's scream.

 

"Kiss me."

 

It was a yearning, a craving, a deep seated desire that had never been filled... always without.

 

"Kiss me."

 

It was a request, a dying heart-stopping request.. and one that I tilted my chin up, closed my eyes and put my soul where my lips were.

 

Empty, yet wanting.

Desiring, yet taking nothing.

Craving, yet holding back.

 

"Please.  Just.  Kiss.  Me."

Author's Note

As I said... this is the kind of kiss I'll search the world over for. Comments, suggestions... whatever. Just enjoy! :-P

Reviews

[None]

I love the repeating and each time "Kiss me" means something altogether different. Your descriptions are unique and each says so much. Nice color scheme here. I don't think I could pick a favorite here, I would want them all. Excellent write!

[mR668]

Your mind's eye of the perfect kiss, and the long for one, is captivating. Had me getting butterflies...wanting a kiss as well. Very nice write.

speechless really, a really good poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Now that is the most romantic yet seductive kiss all rolled into one... your words have left me breathless and my heart racing... you have such a deep passionate way with words. Into my favs with this one.

[Adel Eyes]

ahhh
for a kiss
I would travel a distance
for a kiss
I would lend my lips
for a kiss
I would not insist he shave
{{giggle}} {{giggle}}

[Marie]

I did enjoy. *grins* Excellent work, my friend.

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Hey, come a little bit closer....closer....close your eyes...lean over now, slowly...

Excellent imagery...I wish I may, I wish I might, I wish on the first star tonight! haha

Seriously, good flow, good everything! Thanks for sharing!

[Lady Of Darkness]

I Loved reading this piece. I like the way you chose to finish this write please. just. kiss. me
I thought this piece was nicely thought out plus it flows very well together.
Well hope you find that special kiss you described.
great work

[Lia]

I loved this piece. Great expression. I like how you penned it.
"Empty, yet wanting.

Desiring, yet taking nothing.

Craving, yet holding back.



"Please. Just. Kiss. Me."


Great! Thank you for sharing xx

[Brenda Sue]

I love the imagery in this piece. Beautifully penned. Great job.