The Cries Of The Heart

Poem about loneliness and sadness. Fairly dark (but not too much) and suggests themes of death and suicide. Hope you enjoy! :)

The Cries Of The Heart

Where ever I go, people judge and insult me, 

It has become clear to me that they are too blind to see.

I'm already broken and there are empty tears in my eyes,

People that I care about ask me if I'm okay, I smile and lie.

Can you see that all around me, I am bullied and pushed around?

Try and continue with life, pretending I didn't heart a sound.

I get to the place believed to be home and hell never ends,

No shoulder to cry on and no company of precious friends.

Like my heart, there is nothing but a clouded mist of sadness,

Voices are menacing and cold, they cant take the dwelling madness.

The screams cant take it and wants freedom, so I must end it now,

So close my sleepy eyes and take a final bow.

By Violet Stone

Author's Note

Sorry if its a little too short but that's the way I like my poems and hopefully, everything is spelled correctly! Give me a review and tell me what you think about it if you have time and thanks for reading! (If you like this, you might like my other poems since they are all about the same sort of thing lol)

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I Understand how some of this feels I can relate to this very
much I was Bullied as a child though some of my life.

and at home it was like WW2 when my Parents
Argued and Fought my dad was and is a Alcoholic
but there was a time he wasn't and he was a Great daddy
that part of him is lost but life is never easy
but I keep him in my prayers always.



I am bullied and pushed around?
Try and continue with life, pretending I didn't heart a sound.

I get to the place believed to be home and hell never ends,"


I hope things get better for you.



Much Emotion and feeling in this I was and
am in tears from reading this I can feel the
strong Emotion in this write.

[Violet Stone]

I'm glad to hear that someone has been through the same kind of stuff I have and I hope things are okay with you too. This was more of a past issue for me so I'm not too bad now, thanks anyway. Your concern is really kind of you :)
I'm glad you liked it and that it brought you to tears. I'm happy to hear you have had such a strong reaction to something I didn't think was all that good a poem :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. It's my pleasure always. That's what a poet is passionate and they speak their feelings so it is always Beautiful.
it is Beautiful even if it is a sad moment I am good thank you I have healed from my Dads stupid mistakes but I get Teary and Angry now in then as I still speak to him just won't when he's Drunk I know he is sick but I know he has a roof over his head and he is doing better but until he stops drinking Cold Turkey I'll believe him I am Stronger due to it I did do a poem how much it hurt me called Paint my Red bleeding Heart.

Blessings. kindred poet

[Violet Stone]

Awesome, i'll defiantly have to check it out. Its good to hear that It isn't so bad now and I wish you all the best. You should look forward to the future, there's always light at the end of the tunnel :)
Best Regards,
Violet Stone

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

:) thank you there is always a rainbow after the storm as I say but there can be one in the storm I always keep a positive out look on things.

[Violet Stone]

I think its good to keep positive, its defiantly a good way to get by bad situations. And a nice way to look at things and also, its very true :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

learned it from my Mother :) and having Inner happiness so to speak the sadness or stress in a persons life isn't good for them it puts off a negative chemical in our body so exercise Laughter and things like that help get rid of it I am pretty much a happy bubbly person but have my sad moments but I always like cheering others up like sunshine even if they are sad a hello or I hope your day gets better cheers them up :).

[Jake Donald Stephens]

Your poems are telling me the story of my actual life right now, hon.
(QUIT SPYING ON ME, AND WRITING POEMS ABOUT ME---just kidding, just kidding.)
I enjoy reading. :)

[Violet Stone]

Loool that made me laugh a lot. Actually, I'm spying on you right now with a pen and paper, watching you're every move >:) Muahahaha (Jokes lol) I'm glad that you are liking my poems :P

[Jake Donald Stephens]

Watch very carefully what I'm about to do, then. VERY carefully. (Implications of creepiness? WHY NOT??? Lol.)

[Violet Stone]

O__O And I thought I was creepy lol

[Jake Donald Stephens]

I'm on a whole other level. :D

[Violet Stone]

And there's absolutely nothing that lol. I always thought being creepy makes life a 1000x more fun and interesting :3 lol

[Jake Donald Stephens]

It's great to be thought of as fun and interesting, then. :)

[Fraser Campbell]

The emotions run deep in this poem, and it really strikes a chord. Very aptly named "cries of the heart", as that genuinely seems like what it is. It truly is hauntingly beautiful, and you can feel the hurt as you read it. Very good!

[Violet Stone]

Thanks Fraser :) I'm glad you liked it and I hope its hauntingness doesn't affect your sleep lol :)

[XJaneDoe]

This is incredible. and very relatable. I don't like poetry much but I have to admit that I love this. Its so beautfully written and the way the words flow together is amazing. It portrays the emotions so well.

[Violet Stone]

Thank you very much! Your review really made me smile and I'm very happy that you enjoyed it! :)

[Sami Khalil]

"I am bullied and pushed around?
Try and continue with life, pretending I didn't heart a sound.

I get to the place believed to be home and hell never ends,"

Hope things get better. Very relatable...:)......................

[Violet Stone]

Thank you very much for this nice review. Also, don't worry. I wrote this poem a little while back when there was a lot in my heart. Its more of a past issue now but I thank you for your concern :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. Good to know...You are welcome...

[Yolanda Alt]

What a raw and honest poem.. You really poured your heart out.. I think a lot people can relate to it..

[Violet Stone]

Thank you! Yes, I do normally end up writing whats in my heart. Mostly its full of darkness and despair all the time. But don't worry lol. Never the less, thank you for this kind review :)