STRIPPED

STRIPPED

A Poem by M. L. F.

"Let it go", he said
"How will you see - that I am you-
and you are me?"
Our thoughts, our souls cohesive ease
I am the water
You're the tree
I'll pour my soul into you now
allow it, stripped-
to trickle down
Your honey drips upon my lips
My veils of trust-
- but sunken ships
My Insides melt to liquid gold
and trickle fire to southern folds
You find me there -
and break the holds
The fears that shackled - shattered - sold
upon your lips such honey words
"If you're a bird -
then I'm a bird
You're viscous words slip into me
like honey warm - I finally see...
what you have known eternally..
That I am you -
And you are me...

© 2017 M. L. F.



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M. L. F.


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Wow, wow misty !
I really loved the whole way you wrote this piece. We all do crave for that kind of boundless and egoless love and connection in our lives especially from the opposite gender but very few have that kind of fate to understand and experience that..Those raw emotions are very nicely expressed here...truly a great piece..keep it up. :-) :-)

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M. L. F.

9 Months Ago

Glad to hear the thoughts behind the piece came through for you clearly. Ideal indeed... Thank you .. read more



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A sensuous thought flow... and a wish...

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M. L. F.

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Chris.
Sounds like love. Stripped indeed. You write in cotton clouds and sensuality.

I REALLY enjoyed this poem. I'm attracted to sweetness and soul.

Posted 6 Months Ago


this is written very well I like this

Posted 9 Months Ago


I loved how you used the language.
"My veils of trust-
- but sunken ships
My Insides melt to liquid gold
and trickle fire to southern folds"
The above lines I liked . Your description create visions and thoughts for the reader. I did liked the ending. Perfect closure to the poem. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M. L. F.

9 Months Ago

Thank you for stopping by to read the piece Coyote. I am glad you like the language usage in my wor.. read more
Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

You are welcome Misty. I love your work.
Wow, wow misty !
I really loved the whole way you wrote this piece. We all do crave for that kind of boundless and egoless love and connection in our lives especially from the opposite gender but very few have that kind of fate to understand and experience that..Those raw emotions are very nicely expressed here...truly a great piece..keep it up. :-) :-)

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M. L. F.

9 Months Ago

Glad to hear the thoughts behind the piece came through for you clearly. Ideal indeed... Thank you .. read more
A very beautifully written piece, Misty!
I like the way you brought the message home. Until the state of losing oneself the "i" factor the real melting of souls is not possible.
This is an exceptional piece! Thanks for sharing this....

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M. L. F.

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the compliment.. I am glad you found the work powerful. This is how I feel on the mat.. read more
PhoenixDown

10 Months Ago

Well said. Extraordinary love can be difficult to see, unless you are within its bubble.
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Wow, very well done! This was truly a pleasure to read!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M. L. F.

10 Months Ago

Thank you very much.. I am happy you liked the work..
..Misty
Took me awhile to understand the story behind this poetry. :D And I must say this one is yieldingly intense!

Posted 10 Months Ago


M. L. F.

10 Months Ago

This one is about letting go... letting go of the chains that bind... the walls we build high around.. read more
YanZeros

10 Months Ago

You're welcome Misty :) and thank you for giving the story behind this poem you wrote it beautifully.. read more
Like the slow build up to this. The journey it takes.
Leaves you thinking. Well done.

Posted 10 Months Ago


M. L. F.

10 Months Ago

Thank you.. I try to pace the pieces up to the reveal. Thank you for the review.
..Misty
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Woah...yeah I like this one Misty...pours life fine wine. The fusing of souls, can be both violent and breathtaking. A beautiful balance of light and dark. I love your flawless expressions. Starz x

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M. L. F.

10 Months Ago

Breathtaking indeed.. ;) Thank you for seeing the depth of the piece..of it's emotion, it's heart S.. read more

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