SHUT UP!

SHUT UP!

A Poem by victoria

people say i move to fast,
but they dont see me under my mask,
the pain,
the heartbreaks,
they tare me apart!
moving to you is the only way,
to make the pain fade away
i may seem selfish,
but look here people,
im feeling more than you think,
so i only ask one thing,
SHUT UP!
because im moving, 
at my own passe 

© 2011 victoria


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You go! This is great. Taking charge and not taking any crap from anyone. Great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could feel the emotion seeping out of your words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i will tho

Posted 12 Years Ago


i know you wont

Posted 12 Years Ago


i will not shut up

Posted 12 Years Ago


ok, this was wonderfully written, full of emotion, and so super amazing

Posted 12 Years Ago



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victoria
victoria

Wonder Land, RI



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