Wooden Princess

Wooden Princess

A Book by Yoshiyuki
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A princess must save her kingdom. I am in the drafting phase. I wanted to share with you all just the plot of the story for now.

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© 2011 Yoshiyuki



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Yoshiyuki
I am in the drafting process.I am going to be rewriting the chapters later on.I will be adding more imagery/ fixing the grammar errors later. I wanted to know how the plot is? does it keep you going or does falter to keep reading after a certain point?

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Okay, so I have read all the chapters, and aside from the grammar problem only one other suggestion I would like to make. All the chapters don't seem to follow behind the other. Like each one has its own story. Fixing that would be harder, but I know you can do it!!! Great job on all those chapters, and keep up the work!!0

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on December 8, 2011
Last Updated on December 13, 2011
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Kahului, HI



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