Intense Gaze!
A Poem by
Amy R
Hazel brown orbs
that devours me.
His gaze
sets me on fire.
Most
incredible sensations!
© 2015 Amy R
Author's Note
Just a simple poem I came up with. Let me know what you like about it! :)
Don't forget to rate/share/review. Have a great day.
-Amy
Featured Review
Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "His gaze
sets me on fire."
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,
C. Lee Battaglia
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
thank u so much :)
i really appreciate hearing this.
and sure i will!
8 Years Ago
Thanks Amy!
Your very welcome!
8 Years Ago
no problem :)
Reviews
Mine is blues
not mine
but my baby
He has got the most beautiful eyes in the world
i look away alot
because if i look
i swear i drop my books and my bag
lol
plus i dont want to freak him out
but seriously i realized last time i was gonna drop my stuff
if that happened oh my gosh
i would be ready to go into a grave and just dig myself in for life
Lovely
Posted 8 Years Ago
Mine is blues
not mine
but my baby
He has got the most beautiful eyes in the world
i look away alot
because if i look
i swear i drop my books and my bag
lol
plus i dont want to freak him out
but seriously i realized last time i was gonna drop my stuff
if that happened oh my gosh
i would be ready to go into a grave and just dig myself in for life
Lovely
8 Years Ago
nice !! :)
thanks for reviewing!
The eyes. Can steal our mind and heart with a glance. Thank you Amy for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
The eyes. Can steal our mind and heart with a glance. Thank you Amy for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
thank u for always reviewing. I really appreciate :)
8 Years Ago
You are welcome. I enjoy your work.
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Very nice poem!
Keep it up!
Posted 8 Years Ago
Very nice poem!
Keep it up!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "His gaze
sets me on fire."
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,
C. Lee Battaglia
Posted 8 Years Ago
Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "His gaze
sets me on fire."
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,
C. Lee Battaglia
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
thank u so much :)
i really appreciate hearing this.
and sure i will!
8 Years Ago
Thanks Amy!
Your very welcome!
8 Years Ago
no problem :)
The eyes can be stimulating and captivating when we voluntarily drown in them with desire.
100
Posted 8 Years Ago
The eyes can be stimulating and captivating when we voluntarily drown in them with desire.
100
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
thanks Relic!
I loved this. People rarely admire brown eyes like this, it's always blue or green. Great poem.
Posted 8 Years Ago
I loved this. People rarely admire brown eyes like this, it's always blue or green. Great poem.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Simple yet gracious, baby.
Posted 8 Years Ago
Simple yet gracious, baby.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
thanks Cody :)
Nice to know not everyone has to have blue eyes. :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
Nice to know not everyone has to have blue eyes. :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
yes :) thanks
Well penned and expressed!
few words that say a ton,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
Posted 8 Years Ago
Well penned and expressed!
few words that say a ton,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
thank you for ur review! :)
Splendid piece. So much in so few word. I think FT said it best.
Eyes are the windows to our soul.
Thank you for sharing! :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
Splendid piece. So much in so few word. I think FT said it best.
Eyes are the windows to our soul.
Thank you for sharing! :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
I agree to that :)
thank you.
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