Flirting

Flirting

A Poem by Passionate writer
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You see it as you wish.

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I'm filled with passion deep within,
Blooming and seeping through my skin.

To tease and tempt in every way,
Your curiosity wanting everyday.

My words softly whispered in your ear,
Making you shiver the more you hear.

I will tell you of tales filled with lust,
Your want and need will be a must.

I will flirt with your growing desires,
Making your body fill with burning fires.

Then I will ravish you till you go wild,
Leaving you panting and fully riled!

Don't worry I will set your mind free,
For tomorrow I will give you more of my Poetry.

© 2017 Passionate writer



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"Your curiosity wanting everyday.'

I felt the above line a lil forced, otherwise I really loved the poem. It's very sensuous and creative; nodding people in one direction, but catching them off-gaurd with the climax. And YES, I will wait for more of your poetry

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Passionate writer

10 Months Ago

I really appreciate your kind review.. Thank you for reading my crazy work. Happy writing!



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Good job of painting a word picture that delivers all the physical senses, as one experiences such a flirtation. Your rhymes work well & your message is a nice balance of sensory & sensual, with a perfect hint of seduction. Fondly, Margie

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Passionate writer

9 Months Ago

Always an honor when you stop by and read my work. Happy writing my friend.
Ah! "To tease and tempt in every way,
Your curiosity wanting everyday. " Almost everyone have this hidden character.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Passionate writer

10 Months Ago

Thank you dear!!
This is really amazing. Love rhyme. Well structured, Broken Soul

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Passionate writer

10 Months Ago

Truly appreciate your kind comment. Happy writing!!
this is beautifully written, i really enjoyed this poem!

you're inspiring and I'm new on here, so id love it if you were to review one of my poems. xo

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Passionate writer

10 Months Ago

I appreciate your review and I will gladly read your work sweetie.. Happy writing!!
love it!!! clever and truly well crafted...

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Passionate writer

10 Months Ago

I'm humbled by your kind words.. Hope u enjoy my crazy work.. Happy writing!
Very nice writing! I had to read it twice! My stupid cheesy monitor made one line look like "Making your body fill with burning tires. " and I'm like ....wait .......what? I enjoyed it even more the second time around! Well Done!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Passionate writer

10 Months Ago

Lol I read it again myself just now.. Made sure it wasn't tires!! Lol Thank you for your kind review.. read more
"Your curiosity wanting everyday.'

I felt the above line a lil forced, otherwise I really loved the poem. It's very sensuous and creative; nodding people in one direction, but catching them off-gaurd with the climax. And YES, I will wait for more of your poetry

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Passionate writer

10 Months Ago

I really appreciate your kind review.. Thank you for reading my crazy work. Happy writing!
clever & effective as you lead us on. quite an unexpected ending. perhaps we have dirty minds. you have a twisted sense of humor - i love it.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Passionate writer

11 Months Ago

Thank you Pete.. Twisted isn't so bad... :) Happy writing!!
Pete

11 Months Ago

welcome. Lol. not in this world ...
Dear Angie,

Incredible poem! it was captivating and creative!
My favorite part would have to be, "My words softly whispered in your ear,
Making you shiver the more you hear." The words flowed perfectly!
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry!

Sincerely,

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Passionate writer

11 Months Ago

I'm humbled by your kind review. Thank you Lee. Happy writing!
C. Lee Battaglia

11 Months Ago

You're welcome!

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Added on March 15, 2014
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A hopeless romantic. A dreamer of impossibilities. My writing may not make sense.. But I don't make sense. And when my heart takes over my brain shuts down. I live the moment, cherish the memories and.. more..

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