Falling Away

The winds are changing

Fall, fall, falling away…

Leaves and limbs

Rose petals and shrubbery

Fade, fade, fading away…

Colorful gardens and feathered flocks

Shades of green and edible treats

Blow, blow, blowing away…

Frolicking children and boisterous laughs

Walks in the park and laying beneath stars

Fall, fall, falling away…

Seasons of buoyant recess

And dances of the bohemian

Fade, fade, fading away…

Basking in lambency

Admiring angelic solace

Blow, blow blowing away

Aspiring Scenery

And impeccable cosmos

Fall, fall falling away…

The splendor of dog days

The seasons of Summer

Author's Note

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Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I enjoyed this poem. I love repeating lines in poetry. Nice one.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. The words danced and took the reader to the change of season. I liked the repetition. Gave strength to the words. A very good poem for the season. When Summer is gone. Fall shall come and cold days are near. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sindu]

That felt like wind, leaves and sunlight playing. Nice write :)

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D

[Mayank]

i could feel the summer breeze, there is solace in your poems..

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D

[TL Boehm]

loved the stanza about the children and the one following. It brought back my childhood. Loved running through autumn leaves...the chill air.
What a great poem.

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you so much :D

[Dayran]

The memories of summer fade away with the fall ... fade ... and blow ... of autumn. Nice one ...

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you :D

[Michael]

I absolutely love the way this is structured. Very amazing.

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you :D

[Rana]

The lovely style, the ordering and phrasing, the rhymes and alliteration, the perfect words and the verbs, even the picture and the colors used in the font: it all sums up to make this piece a wonder..

[Briana O'Connor]

Awww well thank you very much :D

[R Smith]

its a brilliant take on Fall as you guys call it, such scenes you lay before us and dress them in the beauty of your words, its an ideal poem, to me Briana I never seem to fault your work and this one is outstanding :)

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you. Thank you very much :D (I said that in an elvis voice) :P

[Steve L.]

Love the utilization of the fall foliage colors to begin each stanza. Fall is by far and away my favorite season!!

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D I was in the mood for some pizazz lol