Refused regret

What to do,

When actions untrue,

Wash over my being.

Let the feeling free? 

Let it break me,

Loose of these chains I wear.

How did this happen? 

Having been trapped in

Heavily, by him. 

Regret nonexistent,

Remorse but an instant

Realizing I am finally me. 

-A

Reviews

[emipoemi]

It took a couple of reads to really get into this, but when the effects are felt it's awesome! I'm not entirely sure what the "of" is doing in "actions of untrue"....."so" would make better sense. And I would suggest some more punctuation here and there, for you start doing that in Stanza 2, but don't carry it through so it could get confusing to a first reader. This is otherwise fantastic! The three R's at the end are grand! Well done!

[audacious]

Thank you so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it!

[emipoemi]

my pleasure.

[Suay Galaxy]

I really love this i could feel connection

[audacious]

Thank you so much!

[Rye]

So very nicely written, flows so well too, I love this write...
I think it is very well put together. Awesome writing.