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Intersection


A Poem by Lily E. Lin
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As usual, I am curious. What is your interpretation?
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Busy street, passerbys

Moving past like they're high
High on life
At an intersection looking out
Watch the people mill about
They're all going somewhere
 
Got no time, 
No time to stop,
No time for what got left behind
 
Intersection, lights go, green
Stop, red, wait no, yellow, oh
Just go.
Don't stop, don't wait, don't look behind you
Cus we got no time
No time to stop,
No time for what got left behind
 
Busy street, stands a child
At the intersection looking out
Waiting for an outreached hand
Waiting for the fakes to fade
And something solid to hold on to
 
Lights turn and still there she stands
All alone, waiting until the end
For something to happen, 
For something to stand,
In the chaos, in the crowd
Stand out, to shout!
I am here! Never fear,
For the real will prevail
Over the fakers, the passerbys
Going left, and right, and straight
Ahead, without a passing glance
Without offering a hand
 
Intersection, lights flashing, red
Stop, wait, no, yellow, oh
Don't go.
Stop and wait a moment, for the sound
To emerge from the headphone haze
From the cellular refrain
Stop and step just a step slower
And see the someone waiting
The left behind
The cold, small hand, that fits
Exactly into your own
Like the spoon into its mold
 
At the intersection, lights go green
And watch the passerbys
Walking hand in hand

© 2009 Lily E. Lin



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Oh.. this is the very essence of the winds of change in today's modern society.. everyone is feeling like they got left behind.. a flurry of machines passing each other.. no time for emotion.. no time to reflect.. and a portrayal of one.. who feels so human it hurts.. to see the flurry... still feels the need for the intersection that was yesterday... a carefree time whereby people had time to care. I loved the flow of this.. it's sad but realistic.. no time to play games.. we must grow up and flow with the traffic.. not be the child with the popsicle on the sidelines.. though we do all fight that intersection from time to time... as it's again human to do so... embrace the fact you can see and feel! Inspiration can and is found in every aspect of everyday life and reality.. great work! =)

Posted 2 Months Ago

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