RAIN

RAIN

A Poem by bibin Sebastian
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RAIN OF LOVE AND REALISATION

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Die now, cremated and be thrown in to Ganges

May the intensity of my love vaporise the whole river

Come back to the heaven and form a cloud

And shower on me the Chatak, who sits on the dried branch.


 

Be the rain that washes all fabrications

Be the rain that removes the dirt from spectacle.

Be the rain that brings lovers under same umbrella

Be the rain that satisfies the thirst of the earth

 


Be the rain with thunder that wake all

Be the rain that brings new life

Come let's form the rainbow

Come let's make the children happy

Come lets die from realities and live in the innocent dreams.


© 2016 bibin Sebastian



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I liked the honest and powerful thoughts.
Be the rain with thunder that wake all

"Be the rain that brings new life
Come let's form the rainbow
Come let's make the children happy
Come lets die from realities and live in the innocent dreams."
I liked the above lines. Hopeful ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Thank you Bibin for the read request. Honestly, while I read the title I expected the writer to express something sad. However you did take me in for a surprise expressing rain that brings new life.
So all in all I liked your work. Great job!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Beautiful words !
Indeed, rain ignites one's spirit of love and realization...
The first stanza is so intensely captured ...

Posted 9 Months Ago


I really love this unusually expressed poem of death. The story is well-told, with the ashes thrown into the Ganges & the river vaporizing (so imaginative!) & then having the rain come down. This is amazingly creative & then your message goes on to describe how this rain is like being together again, possibly only in imagination, where the rain serves many of the same purposes as the missing beloved person used to do. Excellent details & transitions from death to rain to sunshine again.

Posted 10 Months Ago


I liked this. It flowed beautifully and explored the nature of rain in literature and nature. It would have been cool to read more of it, but I like it as it stands.

Thanks for sharing!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked the honest and powerful thoughts.
Be the rain with thunder that wake all

"Be the rain that brings new life
Come let's form the rainbow
Come let's make the children happy
Come lets die from realities and live in the innocent dreams."
I liked the above lines. Hopeful ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 19, 2016
Last Updated on December 20, 2016
Tags: SPIRITUAL, REALIZATION, LOVE, RAIN

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bibin Sebastian
bibin Sebastian

DELHI, CHRISTIAN, India



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My writings come out of my personal experiences. I don't engage in censoring of thoughts. you may not find me poetic or rhythmic. But I assert "I write therefor I exist" more..

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