AND I LOVED AGAIN

AND I LOVED AGAIN

A Poem by bluessadmood
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i thought i was immune ,i had wisdom i joked at myself ,but you said you loved me ,you never loved me,oh the fool i was

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had a dreamy tranquil life
Sleepy happy graceful nights                                                                                   used to love me all my life and rejoiced
In being wonderfully alive                                                                                       used to love everything I did
Never for once did i regret

My walk through lanes of life was steady strides

Full of joy laughs all dreams
Serene Thoughts I had piece with me

Myself I loved and...and then I loved her... I just fell... and loved her

Yes she came full into my life

I told me love was not for me,no... no more for your bones getting old and cold

Never ready for aches and breaks and... tremulence

I had never known for I liked simply my life free and no

Worries restraints, where then she came even bad dreams

Things I never known before 

You said you will fill my life to brim with joy I never known

I rejoiced for a while at everything yes,

I lived everything I saw and ready to break the peace I always known

For I loved again i cried yes,aloud i loved again, yes I broke my oath again and again...  ............................                  

Stirred every wave in my being, I was not ready for

Is love always torment, or it's only you, the more I come to you

You come to me, shaking all grounds under my feet, why me

You say you loved me you died for me and I felt it???death only for me

So why I feel tormented... all the while

You sit by me and I dream of that lovely face but oh soul you always

Told get away for fire knows nothing but to burn and mess with your peace

I say I want to feel it one more time, even if to my demise then i go, I know

She offered me a lot but I saw nothing but wild fire coming !!!

I like to get warmth but you sound like you also... made an oath to break every part... of me

Is love really so cruel, as I never known 

Oh the fool I am I told myself again and again stay away, stay away

But you will never leave me be for you said, come here, I told you, she said I loved you

Silly what more my youth I gave, I want it back

What? You do not want to die,but i am your death
To be continued...
 
 

Ibsen the dramatist once came to land of Arabia, he was enchanted at the charm he saw ,he loved a young lass, she lured me ,she danced ,he saw the beauty and was happy ,but all suddenly she came to laugh at him ,you fool she said ,you old you thought you dreamed and kept laughing, so he just gathered his clothes and walked away, from the deep snow then to the Sahara then back again to the freezing cold, he walked wisely away ,laughing,thinking i was a joke...

 


© 2008 bluessadmood



Author's Note

bluessadmood
i just loved that dramatist IBSEN and the way he pictured how he, the wise and know it all, was fooled by a small Arab girl,it was so symbolic i could hardly catch his meaning...,she lured him ,danced for him until he was full in love and dozed and fell asleep,but she took the chance,she laughed at him and ran away,like making fun of him,from the freezing cold he came to the hot Sahara ,he found magic and found her,he was a fool ,then back to the icy cold he strolled back,laughing all the way

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A very strong piece.............packed to the brim with emotions we have all felt.........this really struck a
chord with me

Stirred every wave in my being, I was not ready for

Is love always torment, or it's only you, the more I come to you

You come to me, shaking all grounds under my feet, why me


It is how I felt a year ago........and that pain never seems to ebb, even in the happiest of moments,
and the sadness is that we lose faith............you write with tremendous feeling.


Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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You have painted a beautiful picture of the weakness of our natures......sometimes the chink in our armors is a very simple thing. :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bluessadmood

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much..so glad you liked this.
Wow I'm jealous cause you're writing is the best!

Posted 3 Years Ago


You have described in your own way.... the story of someone being used and abused over love. An awful thing to happen to anyone...to say the least. No one should be allowed to play with our heart strings..it's just not fair. The strings get broken and it destroys us...unless mended of course.

Thanks for sharing your strong feelings on this subject.
Babs xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very funny but emotional write. I couldn't stop reading; it may need a few corrections, but i wasn't bothered by it. I enjoy ibsen's work too even though i've only read one :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was wonderful. I highly enjoyed it. I love poems based off of stories ^^

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this poem and the way love is described in it. great job on this write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love, no matter how hurtful at times, makes us want it over and over again. We allow its spell to get into us until we get intoxicated. It is just so enticing to the senses that we can't learn from past experiences. Perhaps, love is just worth trying and worth fighting for. Nobody gives up on love, methinks. I like this line:

"For I loved again...broke my oath again"

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome..way better than anything i ever wrote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very intricate and powerful piece of writing. The scope of depth is just amazing. You had really powerful and thought provoking lines in here. "Is love always torment....." Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh i love this piece.....ive been through this before....its great to read it on this poem. you are a wonderful writer. im glad to find your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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