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The B***h

The B***h

A Poem by bluessadmood
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please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

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Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,
The b***h she is ...life
 
 

© 2018 bluessadmood



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bluessadmood
its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

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Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

Posted 9 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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As Helena stated, it is often a case that when we are told not to look - we look. It is that simple, it is that part of us that just needs to see. This piece speaks well of that taken to another level, and it speaks of a brutal reality that many find themselves in. Some would see it as quite twisted, to think anybody would want to live in pain - but there comes a point when you have lived in pain for so long, it becomes your norm. Being outside of it, is frightening. Many times, those in chronic traumatic situations will find themselves adapting to it as some sort of defense mechanism. It is sad, but it is true for far more people than some people would imagine. The thing to keep in mind is that pain is personal and subjective, that it may be one thing for one person and something else for another... it is not always what you think it might be.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Funny...I was drawn to the title, starting reading, forgot about the title, and didn't remember it until the end--full circle. That, if you ask me, is a sign of great cleverness.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

Posted 9 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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