The B***h

please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,

The b***h she is ...life

 

 

Author's Note

its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

Reviews

[Helena]

Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

[samantha]

i have to agree with Helena, but life teachs us so much and wants us to learn from it, but its ones choice to take that lesson and learn from it then put it to knowladge......

thats what ive learned to learn the ways of learning from the wrongs and turning them to knowladge and it betters one self....

from samantha

[Celtic Cat]

sniff sniff. It's sad because it's true. I'm sorry, my friend; no one should have to live with such a b***h. I hope she has a change of heart and rains happy on you!! It's my wish, anyway. Love you, Moayad. Keep your head up and your mouth open. Spread the knowledge and perhaps one day we'll all come to our senses and stop the insanity. Another wish on my part....

[Brianna Brie]

This is cleverly done. It gives the aroma of self torture or punishing ones self for something that occurred in life. Well done!

[An Ordinary Woman]

It isn't disgusting. It's life and life can be a b***h. We all have our moments when things rub us wrong or weird things happen. I like your poem- it's honest.

[Wildecat]

I would agree with my friend Helena, a wonderful and honest write. Thaks also for the kind review of She Devil your comments and friendship are most welcome.

[J.Black]

haha what do you mean dont read? That was a little late notice, it was at the end of the poem! Ha!

"Let it come, I like it when it's dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me"

I loved this, it was full of emotion, and no it was not disgusting! VERY STRONG!

[Ally]

This is great, Life is always creul.
Dont read?
I loved every momnet of this, strong emotion.

[darkgurl]

Such a strong write here, This is wonderfl...Kim

[Amy]

This is so well written!
I applaud you!
I agree with you 100%
Life is a total b***h!
100 points for you my friend. :)

[Pink Poison]

Strange how we all have lifestyles that feel natural to us, even if they're twisted. Interesting and intriguing glimpse into the human psyche.