For Your Eyes

For Your Eyes

A Story by bluessadmood
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Your Eyes...
Your Eyes told me life is still worth living contrary to what I used to believe..They told me there is so much beauty and hope to still live for..
I have walked some roads nobody ever walked before,been to places so miserable and lonely and cruel nobody ever thought they existed on this earth..
I have lived such loneliness that will kill any man soul..that will make him wish he has not seen the day he was born...
Yet the light in Your Eyes make me forget every trouble I have been through, Make me wish I would live my life a second and a third time
Your eyes tells me life was never worth living before the day I saw you..I wished then I would live a thousand years..just to look in them.
I would forget all my troubled life all the sorrows ,all the pains ,the cruelties I have ever seen,and all the madness I ever seen or heard
I would even love to see all the misery that I have seen again and again just for your eyes sake..
I have seen some dark nights and some horrors that made me shake all over,and was so afraid,yet I stood my grounds..
I have faltered at times and almost gave up every hope..even tears I have shed a lot..but I waited and was patient..
Just hoping for another day to see Your eyes..
Your eyes Is What I Live For...
 

 


© 2009 bluessadmood



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Oh Blues..this is brilliant! Is it not incredible how one person can change the entire course of our lives? How deeply they can touch us with one simple thing...such as eyes...I am glad that You have found those eyes to live for...I too...once knew such eyes ..

Posted 7 Years Ago


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aw the awakening and with it a new measure of life and love :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh Blues..this is brilliant! Is it not incredible how one person can change the entire course of our lives? How deeply they can touch us with one simple thing...such as eyes...I am glad that You have found those eyes to live for...I too...once knew such eyes ..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was such a heartfelt write! I loved how much emotion you poured into this write, and I truly believed every word that you wrote. This story flowed really well, and was captivating from the very start until the very end. In a world which has become so wrought with lies, pain, and hatred, it is certainly in a persons eyes which provide you with the truth, hope, and love. :) A wonderful write.
~PaperHearts

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this one I think its so true

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is beautifully written, i really enjoyed it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This flows like a poem..why is it titled a story? You have not described eyes.but have put down all the things that someone's eyes mean to you, do to your life. Its amazing how you have put down the power of eyes...how they make the world beautiful for you despite all the pain and misery.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful. Eyes show the true essence of people.
To see hope in someone's eyes makes you feel like you can go on.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a lovely soulful write, my friend. They say eyes are the windows to the soul, and I really believe that is so. As you look deeply into someone's eyes, you establish a soul connection that can light up your life for sure.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The eyes are always an expression. The emotions come out within the eyes to leave you feeling whatever moods the other person displaying. This is truly a beautiful piece. Very heartfelt.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was filled with passion and fear.
I loved every word and thought it was perfect.
The setting you put this poem you
could see very well in your minds eye.
great write blues man very romantic.
thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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