feelings for you

>_< meep

i hear your voice

and then

it seems like everything

wants to change

 

i see your face

and then all i wanna do

is hide away

 

look into your eyes

i cannot do

for my eyes

would show all my feelings

for you

 

my feelings for you

have never changed

my feelings for you

will always stay

 

your happyness i may not be

but thats fine with me

grief to you i hope not be

for thatd kill me

Author's Note

simple. short. what im feeling >_< -Athena

Reviews

[No name]

yes very short but not so simple, it's shows the feelings of a love, your love. Great write.

[paparapapa]

True that this is simple and short, but it is also cute and sweet. It perfectly shows the power of innocent love. :) Great write.

[Stephen]

This is a beautiful and sweet poem! Nice job

[Starry Eyed]

Awwh sweet poem athena!

[LadyNaida]

Well I think this is beautiful. Is sweet, honest, and straight to the point. Why beat around the bush?

[Audrey Howitt]

look into your eyes
i cannot do
for my eyes
would show all my feelings
for you

Eyes show so much. Hard to hide deep feelings. Lovely write!

[EMF]

Heartfelt and emotional. It works well, but would benefit from spellcheck and maybe a little tidy. But if the poems the form you want it, who am I to comment

[Fairy Willow]

Such a nice elegant and simple write, i love it. There is such sadness and darkness in it. I love how you have epressed yourself. :)

[Alicia Hirshey]

very heartfelt and full of emotions. This was a great write.

[Silent Knight]

very nice.