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Paper Heart-Part I

Paper Heart-Part I

A Poem by B.E. Gonzales

A paper heart lies inside me, shaped into perfect love, love for you...


A paper heart lies inside me

Shaped into perfect love

Love for you


While I was asleep

One night in spring

You took my heart

From my quiet soul


You held my heart

Beside your chest

Beside your kind breast

Near your shy heartbeat


You shaped my heart

Into your taste

Into your favor

Into the perfect love


You returned my heart

And I felt the love

Flowing like a great stream

Running like a mighty river


I woke up 

The sun kissed my face

I was filled with the light

A new hope to hold on to



© 2010 B.E. Gonzales

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Nice dude, no wonder Ma'am Daisy trusts your skill so much, very smooth flowing and awesome :D

Posted 7 Years Ago

beautiful and touching. u say so much in few words iluv it

Posted 8 Years Ago

A riveting poem! The beauty of this poem was unbelievable, and the tone that you created was incredibly enchanting. I loved your choice of vocabulary, and thought that your imagery was fantastic. I enjoyed this a lot. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

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A beautiful poem of hope and love. I like the flow of words and the story. A excellent poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago

very tender..tender and was a stream flowing and that is what perhaps is love..very passionate and soothing..

Posted 8 Years Ago

Very nice... soft in a way too. I could not pick a favorite... I liked it all...

Posted 8 Years Ago

A great poem, you fully get your ideas across about this love. I like your choice of paper, as it shows how the person was able to fold, and change the heart. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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This is a really good poem. Great rhythm and word choice help it flow very nicely. Great job! Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago

There is such a beauty and tenderness in your vivid write! Love the imagery of the paper heart being shaped by your love. Wonderful!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on February 23, 2010
Last Updated on February 28, 2010
Tags: love, heart, romance


B.E. Gonzales
B.E. Gonzales

Ouezon City , National Capital Region , Philippines

I am 13 years old from the Philippines. I write short stories, essays, plays, and songs. I specialize in poetry, both in English and Tagalog, my native tongue. I usually write about love, life, Death,.. more..


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