Sucks to have a heart

Just somethign very short i wrote after being somewhat reminded of an old wound, adding insult to my romantic injurys

Sucks to have heart.. 

to fall head over heels and cut your knee's

.. atleast i stopped myself before I  plunged into the pool and drowned 

Sucks to have a heart.. to feel like.. to feel love.. to fall apart..

Reviews

[Stephanie]

I know how you feel. Hearts are so precious and so fragile, but you have to hurt a few times so that when you find someone special you really aren't afraid of that happening. The way I see it, the hurt is worth it if you enjoyed the time you had together. Hurt is natural and yes it sucks... I like how you say you stopped yourself before you drowned. I drowned once for a guy that never liked me in the first place... So powerful piece! A double edged sword that we all fight with. Great job :)

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Thats great , I am in love with short poems :)

[reca-becca]

AMEN!

[Coyote Poetry]

A two sided coin. We can hope and dream of love. Or do our best to make the right decisions. A very good poem with too much sadness. Love is the best and worst days in a life. I like the ending. I believe us old people need to walk slow and easy into love. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Creepy Swine Guy]

This is pretty profound. I think that you will do so much better than I as you have discovered this truth so much earlier in life than I did. Love is an illusion ... merely lust wrapped in insincere words. St. Paul defined love in his words to the ancient Corinthians and that truth has not changed ... but mankind has. Unlike the love that St. Paul defined ... we "seek our own."

Sigh

[Ethan Paz]

I totally agree but we might say the opposite if we didn't have a heart. Makes one think.

[A.Lee]

I like this one. Its a great short poem. I especially like the ending "To feel like.. to feel love.. to fall apart..." Excellent job.

[Aimee Mahathy]

Oh, I know how this is... and it is rather terrible.
And though it does suck, and it does hurt... I think it's beneficial to hurt it a good few times, so that whenever we find -real- love, we can know it for what it is.
Plus, it's that falling that makes us human~ And we can't help but be what we are. :]
This is a great poem!

[Manda]

wow this was awesome! short poems always seem to have a greater effect on emotions! well done!

[Patricia Gayle]

Great write. Short, sweet, and to the point and still full of emotion and truth. Love it.