Searching for love

Searching for love

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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Been feeling super lonely lately... wish I had that special someone to spend this time with.

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I sit here all alone wishing I wasn’t

I want someone to love me

I wouldn’t say I’m hard to love

Just take the time to understand me

 

I’m miles away from being perfect

Perfection is just a goal never met

My heart has a lot of love to give

The right woman hasn’t arrived yet

 

Someday she will reveal herself

I will reach out for my queen

The beauty that her mind and soul possess

Is unlike any beauty that I have ever seen

 

To hold and kiss her softly

Is more than a dream come true

It is a love dreamt over and over again

A love sent from above, pure and true

 

 

 

 


© 2015 AaronFreitas



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This is beautiful, I too feel alone. This was so real. I didn't feel alone anymore as I read it, I like how starting off went from what seemed like a sad mood to bringing hope in your situation. you did not just leave it as, (I'm alone, etc) it went to ( I know she is out there) .. some people lose hope, I have. But in reading this to be able to give someone hope through your words, is a very powerful gift.. love this Aaron

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

silent poet

3 Years Ago

You're very welcome, And even in your response lays deep words (I could probably re-post this each .. read more
AaronFreitas

3 Years Ago

haha thanks :)
silent poet

3 Years Ago

:) Anytime



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Nice and beautiful. Every soul has it. The!

Posted 1 Year Ago


great write. your poem is vivid. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

3 Years Ago

Thank you I tried to be as vivid as I could :)
Irenic

3 Years Ago

Welcome......:)
This is beautiful, I too feel alone. This was so real. I didn't feel alone anymore as I read it, I like how starting off went from what seemed like a sad mood to bringing hope in your situation. you did not just leave it as, (I'm alone, etc) it went to ( I know she is out there) .. some people lose hope, I have. But in reading this to be able to give someone hope through your words, is a very powerful gift.. love this Aaron

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

silent poet

3 Years Ago

You're very welcome, And even in your response lays deep words (I could probably re-post this each .. read more
AaronFreitas

3 Years Ago

haha thanks :)
silent poet

3 Years Ago

:) Anytime
Aaron.... That was beautiful.. & just to tell you something that girl your waitin for is right in front of your eyes.. Your just to blind to see it. So step back & quit searching. Let God do the work.. When I met Adam I wasn't searching at all... And he came to me.... We spend & waste our lives looking for something that is right in front of us... So stop wasting your life by looking... Let God do his thing.... Im telling you. It really works... I wish you all my luck ♥

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review Tessa :)
Tessa Danielle Guise

3 Years Ago

No problem.... I just know this for a fact!!!!!!! ♥
I really enjoyed this one! I was experiencing writer's block so I thought to go through my read requests. I'm glad I did. This poem is really sweet and very true. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much! A lot of time I do the same... go through my read requests try to get to them .. read more
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Aaron this is a very warm and touching piece. I do hope you find her soon, dear poet

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much Lynn.... I sure hope so as well. Thanks for the review :)
God, this is perfect! It's a dream we've probably all had. It's so hard to find the right one, who is compatible with your needs and personality, and who will stay and love you for just who you are. I haven't found them either. I hope you do!
This poem is the sweetest and the most touching!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

3 Years Ago

Aww thanks you made my day! It always seems like people have an ulterior motive and you find yourse.. read more
I hope this sincere longing for the girl of your dreams.. may come true..nice descriptives within this poem..deeply expressed..

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much Fran! I appreciate the review and I am keeping my eyes open hoping she comes ar.. read more
A really nice piece, can feel the loneliness in it. Don't worry, I'm sure you will find your woman real soon :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much Miyana :)
The beauty that her mind and soul possess
Is unlike any beauty that I have ever seen

Such a beautiful description of true beauty of which people don't see nowadays, Loved it

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

3 Years Ago

Outer beauty only goes so far... beauty within the mind is irreplaceable :) Thanks for the review

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