Beyond the glass...

I will believe, come what may...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

How dark the rain that stained the glass like blood,

Each drop crawling in a slow, steady stream.

An endless river, a torrential cursing flood,

Washing all joyous life away, it would seem.

 

Somehow beyond the glass my eyes perceived

A world in living movement and color now.

How my heart truly ached to believe,

What this painted canvass might allow.

 

Now my fingers cling to the cold, clear pane;

Out there is a wondrous world to pass.

My eyes, my darkened eyes remain,

May they ever behold what is beyond the glass...

 

Reviews

[Shante Payne]

Yes we yern for our dreams to come true wondering if they will ever become a reality. Your imagery in this is brilliant...its as if i'm there staring out that window.

[Poeticpiers]

A haunting piece of writing evoking mental images vividly

[JENY]

That is wonderful….
The imagery…fantastic….
Very apt for the theme…
Liked it so much…

[Cattie Rain (Angela)]

"How dark the rain that stained the glass like blood,
Each drop crawling in a slow, steady stream.
An endless river, a torrential cursing flood,
Washing all joyous life away, it would seem."

I loved the imagery in this stanza. Very thoughtful. It really makes you wonder... The sense of longing is so vivid in this. Excellent work.

[Arabdha]

this poem conveys such a strong all-possessing longing to experience the world beyond..lovely !!

[EmpressPoetess]

"Now my fingers cling to the cold, clear pane;
Out there is a wondrous world to pass.
My eyes, my darkened eyes remain,
May they ever behold what is beyond the glass..."

Entrancing words! The depth of this write is eye-opening! it fills one with a longing and determination to keep going. Bravo!

[imawriter]

what an interesting thought-- rain dripping down a window like blood. I think you may have just ignited inspiration in me there... The last two lines are my favorite. This poems got it all, starts with a dark mood and ends with hope. It's great. Keep up the good work

[Robin]

this just made me think of someone ... words of hope and the faith that drives it ..

[littlelilypurplebride]

I totally agree with sunflower / sara kendrick. very lovley painted out image of this write sad but also lovely like as if the water is taking away all the color from the paint colors or giving the plants a drink. god bless lily

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Great one and explanation of your work..We have a job or purpose in this life and it is up to us to reach out to God and do what he has for us to do..We have to learn and grow each step of the way..Sara