Creature of the Night

She always gets what she wants.

Creature of the Night

 

Her silouette was outlined by the silver light,

 

coming from the peeping eyes of the Harvest Moon,

 

through the white-silk drapes hung from an open window,

 

allowing a cool-stiff breeze to caress her warm inviting body,

 

as it animated the see through satin night-gown,

 

like wings of an angel in flight,

 

revealing the curvaceous matrix of her hips and thighs,

 

wrapped in the glow of porcelain erotic skin,

 

releasing the blossoming pheromones of her rapture,

 

leading me from the safe-haven of my bed,

 

into the arms of an alluring-ravishing creature of the night.

Author's Note

Haven't had a chance to format it yet. Image from Google images.

Reviews

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Wow. I really like the flow and pace of this piece. Its like you eased me into it at the beginning then bam, you ended it with an explosion.

"revealing the curvaceous matrix of her hips and thighs,
wrapped in the glow of porcelain erotic skin,
releasing the blossoming pheromones of her rapture,
leading me from the safe-haven of my bed,
into the arms of an alluring-ravishing creature of the night."

Such an awesome play and use of words. Love it!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you Natalie. I took a page out of your book, as you can see ha. ;)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Hahaha, yes I see that. Please feel free to take more pages :)

[lost girl]

We become the voyeurs in the pale blue moon...whispering and gleaning ....holding our breath and pressing against the heat until the finale! Filling!

[Chris Micha]

Oooh I like that...a lot! ;)

[Angels heart]

Wow just, wow. My heart is beating super fast right now. Like always, loving your poems!!!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you sweetie, glad to see you around again!

[Angels heart]

No prob! Same to you ;)

[Shaquana Adams]

like wings of an angel in flight,
revealing the curvaceous matrix of her hips and thighs,

Erotica and stunningly so. As for the format, I suggest aligning it in the middle and in short stanzas. Thanks for sharing Christian, I enjoyed! ^-^
-QuanaWana

[Chris Micha]

Thank you sweets! :)

[s y e]

Oh so very sensual and lovely... what more is there to say? ;-)

[Chris Micha]

Nothing much, all about the woman ;)

[s y e]

You're such a ladies man, arentcha? LOL.

[Chris Micha]

Yes I am! :)

[s y e]

Thought so. ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oozing sensuality that it is my friend.Excellent pen true :)

[Chris Micha]

Vidya, thank you so much for your amazing words :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

It was your lines that were amazing Chris.You are welcome :)

[Chris Micha]

:)..........

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

a very sensual write good job

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Samantha! :)

[MsJewel]

Beautifully soft and sensual....
You have captured the dream like feel well.
Stunning poetry my friend

:) Julie

[Chris Micha]

Hey Julie! That's awesome you like it. You picked up on the dreamy part of it, that's how I wrote it. Makes me happy! :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The descriptive imagery relates well and guides the reader, well done, good read.

[Chris Micha]

Thanks so much, Thomas. I really appreciate it my friend. :)