Just another bird

Just another bird

A Poem by Jéssica Fernandes

you spoke poetry
like venom
under whisky's sigh.
so i fell for you
like a tipsy bird
would fall for death
at his very last try
to fly.

© 2013 Jéssica Fernandes



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Whoah.......profound and powerful. Much enjoyed this one. Well done!

Posted 8 Months Ago


another gem ... love it Jess

Posted 1 Year Ago


Your words become as a living thing, struggling to rise but stumbling, flooded with this painful poison. How it aches.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Clever, intense, visual.. and very readable.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I have to say the title fits this nicely... a charmer of a personality so they believe... and you get caught in it... and realize the truth and abandon all hope...

Posted 5 Years Ago


Great poem! Strong and somehow touching 100/100 ^.^

Posted 5 Years Ago


power in a few short lines..great!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jéssica Fernandes

5 Years Ago

thank you!
Short but intense with emotions.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Jéssica Fernandes

5 Years Ago

thank you, junert

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Added on March 29, 2013
Last Updated on March 30, 2013
Tags: poetry, poem, love, death, birds

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Jéssica Fernandes
Jéssica Fernandes

Viana do Castelo, Portugal



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