Just another bird

Just another bird

A Poem by Jéssica Fernandes

you spoke poetry
like venom
under whisky's sigh.
so i fell for you
like a tipsy bird
would fall for death
at his very last try
to fly.

© 2013 Jéssica Fernandes

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Whoah.......profound and powerful. Much enjoyed this one. Well done!

Posted 5 Months Ago

another gem ... love it Jess

Posted 9 Months Ago

Your words become as a living thing, struggling to rise but stumbling, flooded with this painful poison. How it aches.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Clever, intense, visual.. and very readable.

Posted 3 Years Ago

I have to say the title fits this nicely... a charmer of a personality so they believe... and you get caught in it... and realize the truth and abandon all hope...

Posted 4 Years Ago

Great poem! Strong and somehow touching 100/100 ^.^

Posted 5 Years Ago

power in a few short lines..great!

Posted 5 Years Ago

Jéssica Fernandes

5 Years Ago

thank you!
Short but intense with emotions.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Jéssica Fernandes

5 Years Ago

thank you, junert

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Added on March 29, 2013
Last Updated on March 30, 2013
Tags: poetry, poem, love, death, birds


Jéssica Fernandes
Jéssica Fernandes

Viana do Castelo, Portugal

i like to bear flowers in my hair & i like it when my brother picks them for me. it reminds me of our first summer festival, little wildflowers all over my head as if it had just rained spring. more..


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