Just another bird

you spoke poetry

like venom

under whisky's sigh.

so i fell for you

like a tipsy bird

would fall for death

at his very last try

to fly.

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Whoah.......profound and powerful. Much enjoyed this one. Well done!

[G. B. Banks]

another gem ... love it Jess

[An owl on the moon]

Your words become as a living thing, struggling to rise but stumbling, flooded with this painful poison. How it aches.

[emmajoy]

Clever, intense, visual.. and very readable.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I have to say the title fits this nicely... a charmer of a personality so they believe... and you get caught in it... and realize the truth and abandon all hope...

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Great poem! Strong and somehow touching 100/100 ^.^

[revalatia]

power in a few short lines..great!

[Jéssica Fernandes]

thank you!

[Junert]

Short but intense with emotions.

[Jéssica Fernandes]

thank you, junert