1=Two faces

1=Two faces

A Poem by CRZ

Get up, I'm exhausted. I'm extremely tired.
But so is this world
Sit down, You're fine.
But how about that overdue girl?

No one cares,  nobody
but then is hugs and kisses when you're known as somebody.
Only there, when you're beneficial 
they always want the best side of the stick.
But never rides when both sides aren't good
so they never stick.

So I admire the people who stuck around when
it was bad 
cause they maintained in my lane 
despite the light things I had.

But I always had one thing
PASSION.

'Cause success brings stress
therefore its the true assassin 

© 2013 CRZ



Author's Note

CRZ
The first poem I wrote ever, couple months back lol

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Passion is one powerful word, in literature and in life! Stress is an every day word that we all experience to one degree or another. Success for one person brings envy into the faces of your contemporaries. Some will become back-stabbers to you ie. your assassins. Keep writing, let your passion be unleashed for us to read. We see a writer in you!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sadly there are some of Lifes truths spelled out in black and white here. Stress identified as the antithesis of passion for one. Your first poem CRZ? No wonder I keep coming back for more.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Smart smart writing. Those last two lines sum it up so well.

Posted 3 Years Ago


It's a wonderful poem, I loved it :) it's sad that it's true, success brings a lot of unwanted attention and you'll know who your real friends are by who stuck around when no one knew you :(

Posted 3 Years Ago


The real friends are the ones who stick with you when things are bad, love you even when you are a jerk, and celebrate with you over every little victory! You've captured that well here!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Good work keep writing. Keep writing

Posted 3 Years Ago


The subject matter is something entirely TOO easy to relate to. There are far too many fair-weather friends, and not enough REAL friends in this world.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Considering this is your first poem...it is very well written!

Posted 3 Years Ago


i have seen ur better work though the rhyming lines are good . work on the subject a little more deeply and its a fine piece i bet

Posted 3 Years Ago


But I always had one thing
PASSION.

'Cause success brings stress
therefore its the true assassin ..
loved these words..and its really great piece.........of write:)


Posted 3 Years Ago



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