1=Two faces

Get up, I'm exhausted. I'm extremely tired.

But so is this world

Sit down, You're fine.

But how about that overdue girl?

No one cares,  nobody

but then is hugs and kisses when you're known as somebody.

Only there, when you're beneficial 

they always want the best side of the stick.

But never rides when both sides aren't good

so they never stick.

So I admire the people who stuck around when

it was bad 

cause they maintained in my lane 

despite the light things I had.

But I always had one thing

PASSION.

'Cause success brings stress

therefore its the true assassin 

Author's Note

The first poem I wrote ever, couple months back lol

Reviews

[SasuSakuLoVer]

Wow, this is your first poem and I felt like you are use to this! good work!

[rutherford]

Messages of compelling loyalty, success, hardwork. Great start.

[Al R. Arce]

Not bad for a first try! Good message too!

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Wow this is your first? I'm very impressed!! Most definitely keep up the good work!

[Pyyro]

Pretty good for a first poem. Keep it up ^_^

[TPK Stories]

Wonderfully written and constructed!

[MissMellemonroe]

so very true and honest .

[Fahmida]

Very true,this is great.I just loved it . plz come and have a look on mine too.

[ayosonolowo]

Nice poem, take care, i like it, alright....

[Mike Emil]

you are not drinking enough brandy
then you wake up refreshed
and don't pay attention s much to others
waste of time!!!
HAI!!!

believe in yourself