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1=Two faces

1=Two faces

A Poem by CRZ

Get up, I'm exhausted. I'm extremely tired.
But so is this world
Sit down, You're fine.
But how about that overdue girl?

No one cares,  nobody
but then is hugs and kisses when you're known as somebody.
Only there, when you're beneficial 
they always want the best side of the stick.
But never rides when both sides aren't good
so they never stick.

So I admire the people who stuck around when
it was bad 
cause they maintained in my lane 
despite the light things I had.

But I always had one thing

'Cause success brings stress
therefore its the true assassin 

© 2013 CRZ

Author's Note

The first poem I wrote ever, couple months back lol

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Wow, this is your first poem and I felt like you are use to this! good work!

Posted 4 Years Ago

Messages of compelling loyalty, success, hardwork. Great start.

Posted 4 Years Ago

Not bad for a first try! Good message too!

Posted 4 Years Ago

Wow this is your first? I'm very impressed!! Most definitely keep up the good work!

Posted 4 Years Ago

Pretty good for a first poem. Keep it up ^_^

Posted 4 Years Ago

Wonderfully written and constructed!

Posted 4 Years Ago

so very true and honest .

Posted 4 Years Ago

Very true,this is great.I just loved it . plz come and have a look on mine too.

Posted 4 Years Ago

Nice poem, take care, i like it, alright....

Posted 4 Years Ago

you are not drinking enough brandy
then you wake up refreshed
and don't pay attention s much to others
waste of time!!!

believe in yourself

Posted 4 Years Ago

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Added on April 4, 2013
Last Updated on November 26, 2013



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