Okay, lets go.

Okay, lets go.

A Poem by CRZ
"

a small tale told.

"
The walls of the mind, rigid as metal on a New York January neighboring space on earth with free tides of water beside it.
Oh what a human.

There's a tale of the boy who followed his heart. But the heart and human emotions wake up in different rooms. Human emotions doesn't pay the rent...it does only when happy and when the emotions sway towards recklessness, they pay for rent less than the balance. 

While all this jibber jabber is happening, the hearts room is upstairs and it's sleeping waiting to be used. In a way that everybody benefits. It taps its buddy, the mind and recommends strongly to loosen up and attempt something new, free & out of the comfort zone.


The heart doesn't elicit peer pressure
It's a dear blesser.



Then the mind chuckles, " You're hilariously scary, but I'll try anyways."


The heart smiles, holding all the human emotions in his grasp.
Looks at life ahead of him. Says his prayers, laces boots, steps out the door, inhales deep.


Exhales love saying "Okay, lets go"

© 2013 CRZ


Author's Note

CRZ
This is the offspring of my previous poems :
Such a simple battle , yea , dEAR , Thought 2 , Did it? , soul session 1 and 2 , 8:16 , That one thing , People open minds , 6/14 , right now.

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This is very philosophic and very original. I love everything that you wrote, especially when you mention how the heart and human emotions rented different rooms. It is the battle of the self to regard all the important things as it is and to try to be at peace with ourselves. This is lovely. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I like it. Clever. Is the ; intentional in It's?

Posted 10 Years Ago


CRZ

10 Years Ago

Thank you & what do you mean?
Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

It;s a dear blesser in the green stanza
CRZ

10 Years Ago

Ohh, it was a mistake.
Thanks for the reminder
Happy holidays!
This is somewhat endearing.It would be nice if the head and heart learned to work together:)Wise words well written:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


CRZ

10 Years Ago

With trial and error hopefully it'll join the same team
Thank you, happy holidays Vidya
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

lOL You are welcome CRZ and we hope they will join the same team.Happy holidays my friend I wish you.. read more

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