LIVE

Live as today your breath expires 

 

But learn to maintain an everlasting fire 

The fire will galvanize people, tribes to create stories 

& share them to others. 

Leave this earth gracefully as yourself 

Guide those by your own trials & errors. 

 

 

Your knowledge and courage won't be forgotten and lying with the dust

Reviews

[Emily]

I like the meaning, well done.

[Crystal Ellyson]

I enjoyed your poem it is wonderful.

[Donald]

This is a good piece. It is short and says a lot in a compact frame.

[A. Amos]

Great work in this one, you share some good advises...

[NoelHC]

This is an interesting read, it does touch on some truths. I was a bit bothered by the font changes, not sure they add to the poem, or did you have an intention with that?

[stars are far]

what is left from a human is what he had taught when he was alive
that was well said.. good job

[wordman]

good advise ,reminds me of the waltons

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh excellent advice… Mother Nature is our greatest life teacher when we pay attention with utmost respect.