Your Smile

For everyone that give us a wonderful smile that give a joy to any person's heart

Your smile incites all our
Thoughts to be relaxed within your sight
Troubles to be melted in your path,
Senses to be mesmerized in your eyes
Issues to be solved upon your ways,
Feelings to be excited by your voice
Worries to be dissolved into your waves.

Your smile helps us to
Follow our passion of discovery
Seek our desire in priceless treasury,
Read our books in the library
Improve our skills in major literary
Expand our essay to a well-read story
Find our love poetry.

Your smile changes our
Loneliness to togetherness
Darkness to lightness,
Ruthlessness to forgiveness
Sadness to happiness,
Weaknesses to strengths
Illness to healthiness,
Weariness to willingness
Awkwardness to smoothness,

Selfishness to selflessness.

Your smile allows us to
Immediately take a while to rest
Efficiently do our very best,
Confidently stand on our two feet
Brightly achieve any tough feat
Bravely face our given fate,
Spontaneously increase our personal faith
Repeatedly seeing you with bated breath,
Patiently learn the longing of wait
Modestly have will power extremely great,

Definitely forget our last defeat
Truly have sensation we never felt
Completely succeed all our tests
Absolutely deserve all our gifts.

Abderrahmane Dakir

Reviews

[Chuba kichu]

This is a well packed stuff you got here.
Keep writing with the same spirit.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Ken Simm.]

I think this is a brave effort and it outs over the intentions very well. I find myself agreeing with Jack however. Replacing the abstractions with images would, I feel make it more accessible to the general reader on here.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Cameron]

A band of friends who smile despite the obstacles who go on to achieve true greatness. Or even a stranger who smiles and nods to those are fighting battles not with arms, but heart for what is important to them. This is a solid piece that itself inspires smiles of our own.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Samuel Dickens]

Truly, there's no overstating the potential of a smile. Some may make us nervous, but others instill the courage to move mountains.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much Mr.Samuel Dickens.

[Woody]

the number of reviews clearly shows how good this poem is, Abderrahmane.
you've outdone yourself with this one my friend.
there's nothing better than a smile to brighten your day.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

You comment means a lot for me Mr.Woody. It's like my love poetry. Thanks son much.

[Caladoscope]

A desperately romantic piece Makes my heart skip a beat...

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Leviathus Fortes]

A smile is not only free, it's contagious.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Sanjukta Sen Banerjee]

Good attempt and good selection of an everyday theme that can make heaven of hell and hell of heaven.

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Jenny Kort]

Thats a good poem very nice job

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.

[Jenny Kort]

Your Welcome

[sereenaoutloud]

very beautiful and positive write that brought out a smile ! :) You write this as tribute to all the lovely smiles...its a great concept!

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Thank you so much.