Always there

For a contest. All capital phrases are song titles by DBSK. Enjoy!

Always there

 

Hey girl, My little princess

Will you be my girlfriend?

You’re my melody, Rainbow, Flower lady

 

Whatever they say, Believe

Like now, I never let go, You always

Your love is all I need, Always there

Free your mind

 

Thanks to The way you are

Love is never gone, Love after love

Don’t cry my lover, Don’t say goodbye

Forgotten season

Love in the ice

Love is…Paradise

 

O, Tonight, White lies

One Rising sun…Afterglow

 

You’re my miracle, Unforgettable

Remember, I’ll be there, On and on

The story has just begun

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

It was so pretty. It sounded like a song. I can hear the music now. Very well down. And I liked how you combined the words.

[cfix]

I like the way this is written, it's plain and simple. Very well done!

[MoonlightIce]

I loved it!

[Taylor H.]

I really liekd this!

[Lucia]

Ahhh soo amazing! It really touched me. I know I shouldn't feel this way, but the whole DBSK lawsuit really hurts me. I'll miss them and forever listen to these and many other of their songs. LOVE Your My Melody, lately I've been listening to that one on repeat.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on this well written piece!

[deeps]

This is wonderful I like this

[Livenrite]

This is a beautiful piece! Very well written and very good choice in words. Thanks for sharing:)

[Devons]

This particularly good, it really comes across beautifully and makes a lot of sense. Assuming this uses ONLY song titles and NO other words, then, considering the constraints of the format, it is excellent!!

PS am i convinced it fits the rules, tho....

[Truly Ross-Wisehart]

This is fantastic! I am not familiar with this band, but the flow of the subject is flawless, in my opinion. Bravo!

~True