Addicted To Chaos

 

I feel your lips quiver whenever we kiss,

but it slips up if I try to walk away.

Why do you punch me in the heart

then try to hold my hand?

Confusion in my mind

leads to a confession from the soul,

this dysfunction is my addiction

cause I’m an adrenaline junkie

when it comes to us fighting.

Reviews

[Dayran]

Like tossing a jacket on the sofa or the keys into the tray we sometimes manage our possessions with a little aplomb. Its a natural extension of activities that we come to be sure about. I knew a fella who thought tossing an apple up and then catching it implied a certain finesse in the way we do things. Its that way with possessions. Who is she?

[Meliss@k]

Gosh, EVERYONE can relate to this poem.

You did good, you did good

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Seashell]

yeah I dare say there are couples who thrive on these animalistic habits...we can't always explain our moods which results in suchlike responses...although frustration may be a key factor...if only everyone would bite the bullet and TALK things through until an end result is at least in sight..
Great poem here Dale
Thanks for share xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Babsie hoop for the intellectual review.

[Seashell]

no probs :-)

[Muse]

I think of the song

m and m and rihanna "love the way you lie"

abuse..love...hate...obsession...it all clouds together at times making it hard to know any difference some days.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Love that song so I an honored that it made you think of that.
Thank you.

[Muse]

I like that song too...angry...yet passionate lyrics..just like your poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice title for a song. I like the story in the poem. Chaos can make us want more. Each line added to the purpose of this poem. A very nice close to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much sir.

[Frieda P]

What's the puzzling part Dale, sounds like most relationships, guess everyone is addicted to chaos...what would you do if life were dull as dishwater? Good one, really delves into that love/hate relationship we so often encounter.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are right, that is why we are attracted to people who are bad for us.
Thank Moonbeam.

[TL Boehm]

love 'em hate 'em love 'em hate 'em love 'em hate 'em. Why is it that we get into relationships like that? I think you hit on it so well - we are adrenalin junkies. We fall in love with the feeling - the passion and maybe not so much the person. Not sure there. But this poem expressed it well.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[KAOlmsted]

Interesting insight into the mind of D.D. ;-) This reminds me a lot of my first marriage. Volatile. We're still friends, though *laugh* Turns out, the rings were too tight. Once they came off we were right as rain. Nice work, this. Thanks for sharing it with us, Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for sharing your experience... I had a relationship like this years ago, except we weren't married. Glad she finally ended it.

[KAOlmsted]

My pleasure. And very telling you waited for HER to finally end it ;-)

[Angi]

Fighting can bring out so much passion! Some people just can't let go of the rush. This spells it out so well.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I believe you are exactly right.

[Rita L. Sev]

So many relationships suffer this addiction, it seems. Love and anger are intertwined, both passions. Your piece is the perfect illustration. Great write!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well they say there is a fine line between love and hate... one of my longest relationships walked that line... it also taught me a lot about myself.