Salty Kiss

A Senryu

 

When doubt plagues the mind

It takes one salty kiss to

Cure a dying heart.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

A salty kiss for me has a particular appeal -- for my mind wanders -- it wasn't from jogging that the kiss became salty -- :)

[Lorraine Montez]

Isn't that the truth! A kiss...the CPR that never fails to resuscitate a flagging spirit.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I like how you put that... thank you.

[Lorraine Montez]

You're welcome!

[Bubo]

So so true.....in three poetry lines you tell a story of hope.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well said Bubo, thank you.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Lovely poem! Simple but effective!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Georgina Cross]

This is very short but sweet, every word is carefully crafted.
Well done!
Regards, Georgie.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much.

[DIVYA]

Amazing...The touch is almost palpable in your words...What a dying heart needs is love.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks hon... As John Lennon said "all you need is love"

[DIVYA]

You are most welcome, always ❤

[Renée]

LOve aNd a mArGaRitA.. Romantic Senryu Bro ( ;

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you sis.

[Renée]

My pleasure to read ( :

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and it reminds of that salty breath of the ocean..which could be like baptism of coming back to life.
a new beginning.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

A great analogy... Thank you Jacob