Mind, Heart and Body

for the sexy haiku comtest

  

Your mind, my passion

While your heart stimulates mine

To crave your body.

 

Reviews

[cest la vie]

Sensuous, beautiful..
Wonderful Haiku, Dale!!

[Tracie Skarbo]

Another excellent job here...I will be voting for you!!

[Brianna Brie]

Very nice...not just the word, but the sentiment behind it. You make hot very hot!

[Sorry Infamous]

Written very well. You can always tell a good writer through haikus because they can convey so much with so little.

[Kenya J]

This is what's up!! You said so much, in so little words!!!! You showed that you don't have to say alot to express how you feel!!! Great Job!!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Great Haiku

[Sheila Kline]

It's got it all....
passion, mind, heart and
CRAVINGS!!!.................what a marvelous combination!!
Great!!

[Anita B Jacques]

Cool, Hmmmmm, we have to use our imagination on this one. A fun read Cowboy. God Bless

[closed account]

ohhh this was really good, cravings bodies are always a good thing lol