Boredom

What to do?

Don’t have a clue

Where to go?

I don’t know!

Who to see?

Don’t ask me

I need a life

Without much strife

Something to do

Something new

Need something more

‘Cause my life’s a bore

Author's Note

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
My idea for this came from M.Dean. She told me to write about the struggles in my life, and in 2012, boredom was my main struggle. Haha, if only this could be my problem now... Thanks M.Dean!!
Any suggestions, criticism, whatever, would be awesome! Thanks again!

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I like this piece simply because that is exactly how i feel about my life, i can relate to it mainly the last line...
I need something more because my life's a bore, tell me about it.
You know a poem is great when people can relate to it, and when its written from the heart, this poem has both.
Well penned :)

[Dearantlers]

Thanks for taking the time to review!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your very much welcome :)

[Kieta!]

Very cool!!! Lol I've totally felt like this before too

[Dearantlers]

Thank you so much for reviewing my poem!!

[Brittany Zedalis]

Ha, I've felt this way before. Great job.

[Dearantlers]

Thanks so much for the review!

[LunarSong]

Nice poem, and your life is probably just as interesting as mine... which I guess mine can be pretty interesting at times (thank you little kids who love ending up in the E.R.!). Though one thing about the poem, honestly I'm less board when there's strife, I think that life would be dreadfully boring "Without much strife." But that's just me. :)

[Dearantlers]

Haha! Thanks! I just wrote this this summer because I was had nothing to do. Then when school started this was the exact opposite. I need to write a poem saying that I wish I was bored now. :)

[LunarSong]

Haha, you so should, and you should find a way to connect it to this poem :)

[Megara]

awesome!when i get bored i write short poems like this one.

[Aellø]

I love the flow of this poem :)

[Mary]

like the poem, it has a nice rhythm to it. As for suggestions, lord, I wish I could be smitten with boredom! Get involved-volunteer-BE the CHANGE!

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Something to do
Something new
That's exactly what I think every morning! :) 100/100

[Persephone]

Simple, but good poem. It has a song-like quality. A good book, show, or computer game have always curbed my boredom! hehe

[Marissa]

this is awesome, and so relatable.