Worry

The feeling we all felt

The amount of time it takes...
The feeling of suspense and what is at stake
Sometimes it may not have any use
You just have so much to lose

Sometimes the use is an success
Even though it give that much of a stress
It leaves you a mess
To know about the progress

Sometime over thinking
It is as you are sinking
Unable to come back
Something that whack

It is not known
Especially when you are alone
You must bare and endure
For something that you are unsure

The feeling of assure
Will get rid of unsure and secure
Its just the feeling of excess you expressed
Something you would never guess

It is the feeling of coming true
A great feeling able to received through you
Hoping what was untrue
It was actually untrue, so just say "Thank You"

Reviews

[Lorraine]

I find it pretty meaningful and actually inspirational. However, I suggest you improve some of the grammatical errors here. That way, you'll be able to express your thought in a more elegant way. Even so, it's an interesting piece with an easy flow.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

I commend your rhymes, but there are a few grammar mistakes that I feel take away the context of the poem. Do improve on this as I believe your creativity shines clearer in well-structured lines.

Keep writing,
Alex

[untoldtruth]

this poem gets the point across and is good, i especially like the 4th and 5th stanzas, keep up with good work *yea i noe that sounds like what a teacher would write on ur homework*

[Wicahpi]

you are a rhyming machine! lol
good job