a not so complicated poem about exercise.

a not so complicated poem about exercise.

A Poem by h d e rushin

the first and final time

I did a yoga pose. Yoga

ran out the house

never to be seen again.



dana

© 2014 h d e rushin


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Lol, simply divine.... You have a sense of humor I see

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ha ha I was not expecting that at all. Thanks for brightening my day.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I have to share this with my friend Christine. Exercise is a dirty word. I held the couch down yesterday.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

9 Years Ago

Am i allowed to giggle like crazy at this, Emily!!!
Emily B

9 Years Ago

Absolutely, if it weren't for giggles there would be too many tears
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nocky nocky new a twitter spage of pityfil and rocky nock. and so on. hi...............wait I have to sneeze

Posted 9 Years Ago


sometimes i feel i am doing yoga over the keys on my computer...a zen experience, and my fingers get such good exercise...

and writing is like some crazy meditation...a trance i don't want to come out of...

but then the muse runs out of the house....and i collapse.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The mind boggles.. as did your thoughts here! Don't I know it: the Lotus position usually causes a few petals to fall. Love this, tis far too graphic to be fiction!

Posted 9 Years Ago


laughing out loud dana..what kind of posture lead to the rouge a fraidy cat belly up or a b***h of time to get out of? love this one..very clever piece

Posted 9 Years Ago



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h d e rushin

detroit, MI



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