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A Poem by eglantine

Tonight the sky’s a dusty chalkboard

with a translucent moon cut from thin paper.

Love, draw me some yellow stars

so I can find my way back to you.

© 2015 eglantine

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This was a very sweet and powerful piece of writing. Absolutely loved it.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Eglantine, good to see you my friend. This piece is concise, crisp, clean, heartfelt, and tender. Always love your moon work themes!

Posted 2 Years Ago

Love this so much! Such great description.

Posted 2 Years Ago

Lovely...i love it specialy Last two nice

Posted 2 Years Ago

Nice................ ......,,

Posted 2 Years Ago

Gentle and powerful words.
"Love, draw me some yellow stars
so I can find my way back to you."
You said a handful in the outstanding poetry. The above lines I did enjoy.

Posted 2 Years Ago

It's good to see things like this. It reminds me that poetry exists for a reason.

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 Years Ago

aw well thank you! :)
stars, perfect stars, pierced with love so the light can shine through


Posted 2 Years Ago

Eglantine is a talented poet I know well, a guarantee for quality literature. Fine poem, like the classical address to love as a personification, and a big central image that works very well. Advise all, read this.

Posted 2 Years Ago

Aye, but not since Bethlehem. Good poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Added on September 25, 2015
Last Updated on September 25, 2015



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