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A Poem by eglantine

Tonight the sky’s a dusty chalkboard

with a translucent moon cut from thin paper.

Love, draw me some yellow stars

so I can find my way back to you.

© 2015 eglantine

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This was a very sweet and powerful piece of writing. Absolutely loved it.

Posted 12 Months Ago

Eglantine, good to see you my friend. This piece is concise, crisp, clean, heartfelt, and tender. Always love your moon work themes!

Posted 1 Year Ago

Love this so much! Such great description.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Lovely...i love it specialy Last two lines...so nice

Posted 1 Year Ago

Nice................ ......,,

Posted 1 Year Ago

Gentle and powerful words.
"Love, draw me some yellow stars
so I can find my way back to you."
You said a handful in the outstanding poetry. The above lines I did enjoy.

Posted 2 Years Ago

It's good to see things like this. It reminds me that poetry exists for a reason.

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 Years Ago

aw well thank you! :)
stars, perfect stars, pierced with love so the light can shine through


Posted 2 Years Ago

Eglantine is a talented poet I know well, a guarantee for quality literature. Fine poem, like the classical address to love as a personification, and a big central image that works very well. Advise all, read this.

Posted 2 Years Ago

Aye, but not since Bethlehem. Good poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Added on September 25, 2015
Last Updated on September 25, 2015



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