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A Poem by eglantine

Tonight the sky’s a dusty chalkboard

with a translucent moon cut from thin paper.

Love, draw me some yellow stars

so I can find my way back to you.


© 2015 eglantine



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This was a very sweet and powerful piece of writing. Absolutely loved it.

Posted 12 Months Ago


Eglantine, good to see you my friend. This piece is concise, crisp, clean, heartfelt, and tender. Always love your moon work themes!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Love this so much! Such great description.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lovely...i love it specialy Last two lines...so nice

Posted 1 Year Ago


Nice................ ......,,

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gentle and powerful words.
"Love, draw me some yellow stars
so I can find my way back to you."
You said a handful in the outstanding poetry. The above lines I did enjoy.
Coyote


Posted 2 Years Ago


-sigh-
It's good to see things like this. It reminds me that poetry exists for a reason.

Posted 2 Years Ago


eglantine

2 Years Ago

aw well thank you! :)
stars, perfect stars, pierced with love so the light can shine through

inspiring

Posted 2 Years Ago


Eglantine is a talented poet I know well, a guarantee for quality literature. Fine poem, like the classical address to love as a personification, and a big central image that works very well. Advise all, read this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Aye, but not since Bethlehem. Good poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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I graduated with my B.A. in English (emphasis creative writing) My ultimate goal is to be the U.S. Poet Laureate and to be a college professor of poetry. I'm a wildflower with a poetic soul. I'm als.. more..

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