The Mirror

Who is this other person?

Does that person in the

Mirror

Really me

Or just a dream?

Does she live in another world?

Is this other world far away?

Where is this other

Me?

Where is the other

World?

Does she see me the way

I see her?

Winner

Mar 12, 2015

• Need Reviews? IV
• The Mirror

Author's Note

Hope you liked it!!

Reviews

[anne]

nice one...sweet......:))

[Emily]

Thanks Anne!

[denise]

I can relate to this- especially as a woman! This was a short and sweet write and I enjoyed it! Thanks so much!

[Emily]

Glad you liked it Denise!

[stars are far]

That was very well written and I loved how you employed this work. very amazing .

[Emily]

Thank you so much!

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

"Does that person in the
Mirror
Really me
Or just a dream?" - Is that person or Does that person in the mirror really show me

Always love mirror poems a great capture of the perception of self very clever.

[Emily]

Thank you!!

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Good use of brevity to express this age old question. And, yes, we all wonder at times! Nice work.

[Emily]

Thanks Sharon!

[Mr_M]

I am probably echoing the other reviews when I say how precise and tight this poem is. It leaves me wondering.

[Emily]

Thank you!!

[Riley Justine]

Really well done! The simplicity makes it even better, I believe. Awesome job

[Emily]

Thank you!!

[Jennie Baron]

Very brief but it says a lot in those few words! Like Kayleen I like its simplicity. It would benefit from the corrections she suggests. Nice work!

[Emily]

Thanks Jennie!

[Kayleen]

very good and simple style :) i like it a few corrections just format/Grammar wise:

'were' should be 'Where'
'Does' in the first line needs to be 'Is' to be grammatically correct

keep up the writing!

[Emily]

Thanks I will fix that! Thanks!

[Mila]

Congratulations on winning the Need Reviews? IV Contest!!

Loved it, very beautifully written!!

-Mila

[Emily]

Thank you so much Mila!