ablaze

ablaze

 

 

the blue tip of a flame

you're my cool touch

at the end of the day

just above the orange solace

that burns within my heart

for the love you kindle

when you strike me

with your arson eyes

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/8/15

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"ablaze"
erin-cilberto,
I see you as the match stick and your loved one as the person which brings on the flame. From the first line to the last she holds the strength to strike the match hidden within your heart.
Solace at the end of the day with coolness refreshing but warm and flourishing; trusted:
"the blue tip of a flame
your're my cool touch
at the end of the day"
A place to call home; safe, trusted:
"just above the orange solace
that burns within my heart
for the love you kindle'
A definite power within your life, not to be denied or ignored!
"when you strike me
with our arson eyes."
this poem really challenged me and I found myself really musing what could of brought it on and what was it's meaning to you personally.
Bless you much!
Kathy

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Kathy,
j.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Thanks j. I enjoyed your poem and have a nice week.
Kathy

[rubie]

wonderful romantic write...

nothing more passionate than fire in one's eyes.....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, rubie.

j.

[Cassie]

Such a lovely romantic poem. Loved it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Cassie.

j.

[Arjun Singh]

I lvd sm of d wrds u used in d poem
' ablaze ' ' the orange solace ' ' your arson eyes '
It did make a deep impact, nd easily made me feel all u had to say...
:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Arjun

j.

[Holly Mason]

Ablaze is a beautiful word just beautiful
Arson eyes...I am digesting this statement
My wit wants to make insurance jokes
But my soul says so much more
A lingering love
Thank you for sharing fine sir ,Holly

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Holly,

j.

[marcus]

there is fire, in the eyes, and passion in the soul!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, marcus.

j.

[terry smith]

Spontaneous human combustion...oh how I wish I knew that feeling again.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, terry....

j.

[Mindy Ka]

Where's the icepack? Hoo, sexy stuff.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your visit, Mindy.

j.

[Patricia Wedel]

Wow... to see a person's soul in their eyes...
a flame of undying desire...
"the blue tip of a flame...
just above the orange solace"
gives me the peace that surpasseth
understanding. Beautiful poetry.
truly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind words, Pat.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Sounds like she lights your fire with her eyes. An excellent write Jacob. I like the orange solace and the last line.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, andrew.
j.