colors of calm

colors of calm

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto


colors of calm

 

 

a stifling wind

eases

you breeze into my life

wafting gently toward my heart

 

clouds part

as we come together,

i love the sky blue of you

halcyon is not dipped in sadness

 

necessarily,

and rain doesn't need to be unpleasant

if we share the umbrella of destiny

facing any causal climate 

 

with serene stillness.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

12/18/17


© 2017 jacob erin-cilberto



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If there was ever a great weather report it is here.

Regards,

Al

Posted 9 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Months Ago

thank you, Al.

j.
warm rain shared is the best, thunderstorms even better. I love the romantic side of your poetry, when you decide to be charming there is no stopping you!

Posted 9 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Months Ago

thank you, Corset...
j.
i love everything about this poem, i don't even feel like i need to say anything else. great work

Posted 9 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Months Ago

thank you, redalia.
j.
"and rain doesn't need to be unpleasant
if we share the umbrella of destiny
facing any causal climate "

These three lines Worth Gold.

Posted 9 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Months Ago

thank you for your kind comment.
j.
The melancholy feel to this reminded me much of the holiday itself, how it settles into our soul for a long winter's nap.

Stirring and most poignant, Jacob!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

9 Months Ago

thank you for your words, Kelly.
j.
hope and serenity in a single person is what we live for, beautiful.

Posted 9 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Months Ago

so true, Patricia...thank you.
j.
There seems to be HOPE in that Calm

"I love the sky blue of you"...... Love this !!!

Jazzy.. :).................

Posted 9 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Months Ago

thank you Jazzy!

j.
J. J.  Nightingale

9 Months Ago

You are welcome jacob !.............:)...
I really love this . . . I wish to share serene moments this way, but most are tangled in noisy thoughts. Particularly love the weather-related metaphor that you've extended gracefully thru-out! *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 9 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Months Ago

thank you for your kind review, Margie.
j.
Another fine write, Jacob.

Loved the weather references throughout. Very apt since love does tend to create a weather pattern in the heart.

Best wishes to you for Christmas and the festive season. I appreciate your support of my writing over this past year.

Posted 9 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Months Ago

and i appreciate you, Doodley..
thank you.
and have a great Holiday..

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True art in few words. Beautiful, sir. You inspire me to become a better writer.

Posted 9 Months Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Months Ago

you are kind, Robert.
thank you,
j.

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jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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