A chick's automatonophobia

are you afraid of the dummies?

You are artificial,

You are an image!

You are a sham;

You are totally fake.

Yet,you stand there as a proud and obstinate hero,

Amidst that labyrinthal passage with a row of shops!

You are made by us;

You are hollow and spurious.

Yet,you give me that cold and terrifying stare,

It seems that you are studying me and my soul,

You are an artifice,made to decide the choice of my clothes

You have a figure so perfect that things just nicely hang upon you.

Yet,you look so real and animate

I can always feel your eyes at the back of my head,watching me and my every move intently.

You can be joined or broken

You can be twisted or turned

Yet,I utter that stupid "excuse me" whenever I cross you.

Dummies and mannequins,

what are you looking at?

Stop it because too many asses and bosoms are enough for a day!

Author's Note

thanks for reading it

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

creepy......
did not know about this before........thank you!
so this is where nightmares start......

clever writing......interesting read.......
awesome poem!!!
i loved it!!!!
:)

[fattycbreezy52]

and i loved the review
thanks a lot:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome..........!!!! :) :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Mmmmmm.....gives me a daydream of being stuck in a shopping mall after hours, with no one there, and then......poof.....!!........they come alive.....yes, our quiet friends during the day, standing still for so long, gets busy at night.....if they can find a lost soul to chase! LOL....i know i know.....overactive imagination......we can turn this into a movie script.....:)

[fattycbreezy52]

not a bad idea;)
actually we can.I am fond of all this stuff;D

[SleeplessVolcano]

Mmmmm...after the 42nd re-write you will silently curse me.....lol......ever heard of writer's block? :)

[fattycbreezy52]

42nd re-write?Are you crazy??????????????????????????????? I am openly cursing you.I though I was the worst;D
Yes,I have heard and been through this too!I guesss..ummm twice!;D

[andre8664]

keep it up you can check out other poem to do better

[fattycbreezy52]

yes,I certainly will:)
thankyou:)