Clocks

Thunder rolls overhead 

Like a constant reminder

That you're in the back of my mind.

Venturing back into the rain

The clocks won't let me forget

All the moments we spent together;

How do you leave someone behind

Who won't let you go? 

The photographs in my pocket

Are fading slowly 

Now my bitterness remains. 

Reviews

[ATG]

A very well written and interesting read.

[MOON]

Lovely write.

[misha]

Wow, I love this piece.

[An owl on the moon]

What a deep aching that flows through this moving piece... Your words wash the world with rain, and make me hope that you've found a ray of sunlight to break through those dark clouds.. Powerful write.