Spicy Ripe Tomatoes

Spicy Ripe Tomatoes

A Poem by Frieda P
"

a little cheeky tongue for a Saturday night...

"
You moan, you groan,
                  you move, you sway
your hips undulated
 a frenzied bountiful vessel 
you simmer the jugs
          saucing like a pro
bubbling, boiling, 
heat on high,
           red and steamy
you moan and groan,
 aaah's and Oh, baby, baby
oh so creamy,
 stir that spicy wood
         or is the wood stirring you?

oh the aroma's so enticing.....
 
over the top, almost there, 
it's still not cooked
ready to bubble over

a blastful squirt 
an eruption
               throws a curve

you weren't quite done...
you still oohh and ahhh

saucy is never that bad
faking it, just
 
doesn't go down

 quite as easy 


© 2013 Frieda P


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Popping Cherry tomatoes instead of Roma for sauce. And I thought LA was looking for me, but wanted Miguel instead. I'm confused. And you and Quinfinn left a mess in the kitchen. Have you seen that mess? I'm not cleaning that up!!! Looks like someone was chasing someone around in there flinging sauce everywhere. Or is that another poem?
Never mind.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Must have been LA, her flight got cancelled, she stopped over to chase Quin around the kitchen a few.. read more
Michael G.

11 Years Ago

Ah that explains a lot. I was just over at her place too. I thought I heard her say something to me,.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL TMI!



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I"m starving. I want like 80 cheddar cheese rolls from Red Lobster. Jesus Christ on a pogo stick those rolls are good. and butter, s**t loads of butter. I wanna get butter in my eyes, in my ears and up my rectum. Body builders get food obsessed from the deprivation of stark limited diets after awhile.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Jaysus, somebody ate their Wheaties this morning, or not...........
Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Egg white turkey omelet and rice.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Gawd, is that all you guys eat, sounds like my son's diet...boring, no wonder you're so freaking ang.. read more
Lol I feel like I've discovered the recipe to cook your sauce :P I can't help but stir my finger in for another taste :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha....back away from my kitchen and nobody gets hurt. ;-P
Ha! Amen, sister...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

:-D
She sounds unfulfilled at the end...oh well there's always next Saturday, if he's lucky haha ;P

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha I lose them more than I let on here...in fact, you'd probably disapprove of all the episodes I .. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Mission Accomplished ! ;-P
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

;)
Such a delectable poem Frieda!

Here we do not cook tomatoes that way. We just dice them into small tiny pieces, and make chutney out of them. Who cares done or not! ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

lol dice them into tiny pieces, you have no clue how much that made me laugh, sorry, and thanks!!read more
DIVYA

11 Years Ago

:)
Very sassy and saucy! ;D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL!
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

Sassy Mrs Fridea!
Popping Cherry tomatoes instead of Roma for sauce. And I thought LA was looking for me, but wanted Miguel instead. I'm confused. And you and Quinfinn left a mess in the kitchen. Have you seen that mess? I'm not cleaning that up!!! Looks like someone was chasing someone around in there flinging sauce everywhere. Or is that another poem?
Never mind.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Must have been LA, her flight got cancelled, she stopped over to chase Quin around the kitchen a few.. read more
Michael G.

11 Years Ago

Ah that explains a lot. I was just over at her place too. I thought I heard her say something to me,.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL TMI!
Your hilarious! Saucy.
Glad to know you had lunch.
;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL!!
i don't know whether to go fix up some pasta and sauce or play with myself! mama mia!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

quinfinn

11 Years Ago

that would be telling
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Fuhgeddaboudit, I already know! ;-)
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

wokka wokka wokka
ROFLMAO!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I think she's trying to ignore us....................
LA Lorena

11 Years Ago

she was busy writing a new poem!
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

she's baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack!

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