Queue the Music

Queue the Music

A Poem by Frieda P

Queue the music of my heart
mambo yourself into my vision
tango my toes to new heights
waltz me to the end of time

© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
written for write four lines contest

captcha-footing

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great 4 liner Frieda, last line made me think of my favourite song.. Leonard Cohen's
"Dance me 'til the end of time"..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I saw, I'm doing the happy dance! :-)
Stella Armour

10 Years Ago

now i have posted a video on it just for you..
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I'm on my way...........................................................
Waltz us to your tune...Short but real good ...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Awh thanks Sami, care to dance, I must warn you though, I tend to lead lol ;-)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Hahaha. Thank you ...;)
Love this! Of course, you would write of dancing... Well done! (and that captcha - how did it know?)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha dancing is life! I know, my captcha's are freaky sometimes, I think the site is bugged or haunte.. read more
Very catchy poem with a music theme. Nicely done. Eileen

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by Eileen, most appreciated.
And then you'd Jive and Cha cha cha ;-P Ha! Give the Charleston a go too! You'd be pooped at the end! ;-P Loved this write, good luck, hun! xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

The apple and all that jazz ;-P
s y e

10 Years Ago

Yep, yep!
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

xD
Perfect, now were in direct competition with each other. may the best poet win.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Jack...

10 Years Ago

I entered this one:

Bring your hammer. bring you saw
Bring your driver, screws .. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Lol, just caught this!! ;-P
I can do that.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha I think you're talking the horizontal mambo. ;-)
Are we dancing again?? ;-) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redflutterby

10 Years Ago

Oh good lord....bahahaha... ;-pp
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

xD
redflutterby

10 Years Ago

xD...xx
Cha cha cha...love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I can tell you love dancing too. :-)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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