Sweet surrender ~

Sweet surrender ~

A Poem by Frieda P

in poetry

Poetry_words that wrap around the senses of sentiments in motion_ poetry. 

Aim'd at the heart
 sacrificed within soul
       seducing the mind,
 dipped in reflective 
   recollections of
        inquiring eyes
shared as broken bread
   sipped as fine wine
redirected inky flow within
   acquaintance interconnections
surging through inspired veins of
   perception's emancipation
rendering  knowledge in
    fact, fiction or folly's
       fantasies written in skywriting's
                 high voltage ecstasy 
insight unto human nature's
   inkind appreciation offered,
  proclamations of good will
            & infinite spirited possibilities 

Sweet surrender in poetry

© 2014 Frieda P

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Frieda P

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All of these things are poetry...every last one. And it is utter bliss to surrender within them! You my friend are a master of wrapping words in so many fabulous ways. We read your poetry and sigh, cry, scream and dream because we are transported beyond the screen we sit in front of!! I love this one...xo

Posted 4 Years Ago

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Frieda P

4 Years Ago

Woo doing the happy dance in your words Red, thanks so much, you made my morning! Mwah xo


Beautifully expressed. It is what poetry is and it is definitely what we poets aim to do!
Nicely written.

Posted 2 Years Ago

I enjoyed reading this. Wonderful poem

Posted 3 Years Ago

I loved all the words that you used in this poem :)

Posted 4 Years Ago

The format and flow of this piece is absolutely captivating. Great read:]

Posted 4 Years Ago

I love the flow of this.. a river of beautiful prose.

Posted 4 Years Ago

This is so beautifully written and so very true! The following lines are brilliant and have been permanently etched in my mind!
"seducing the mind,
dipped in reflective
recollections of
inquiring eyes
shared as broken bread
sipped as fine wine"

Posted 4 Years Ago

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your words are of a constant beauty excellent write

Posted 4 Years Ago

its lovely.... brilliant flow with words.... word-crafting done in fabulous way....

Posted 4 Years Ago

beautifuly done, every line's wonderful. Exquisite

Posted 4 Years Ago

The poetic danseuse waltzes with her words again!!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago

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Added on March 27, 2014
Last Updated on March 28, 2014
Tags: poetry, heart, soul, spirit, surrender, reflections, recollections, inspired, fantasy


Frieda P
Frieda P


If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..


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