Sweet surrender ~

Poetry_words that wrap around the senses of sentiments in motion_ poetry. 

Aim'd at the heart

 sacrificed within soul

       seducing the mind,

 dipped in reflective 

   recollections of

        inquiring eyes

shared as broken bread

   sipped as fine wine

redirected inky flow within

   acquaintance interconnections

surging through inspired veins of

   perception's emancipation

rendering  knowledge in

    fact, fiction or folly's

 familiarity, 

       fantasies written in skywriting's

                 high voltage ecstasy 

insight unto human nature's

   inkind appreciation offered,

  proclamations of good will

            & infinite spirited possibilities 

Sweet surrender in poetry

Author's Note

Reviews

[redflutterby]

All of these things are poetry...every last one. And it is utter bliss to surrender within them! You my friend are a master of wrapping words in so many fabulous ways. We read your poetry and sigh, cry, scream and dream because we are transported beyond the screen we sit in front of!! I love this one...xo

[Frieda P]

Woo doing the happy dance in your words Red, thanks so much, you made my morning! Mwah xo

[Deuces]

Earth, Wind and Fire... nice.

OK - back to the poem. I think every one on this site and for that matter, every poet can relate to this. It's almost a tribute to where the mind and the imagination can take you when you surrender yourself to the pen and it's limitless possibilities, whether it be fact or fiction.

Your pen is priceless.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much G, jazz'd you enjoyed.

[Rita L. Sev]

shared as broken bread
sipped as fine wine...

And what a feast it is, Frieda... This is wonderful. Saving it to lift me up when I need a boost...

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Rita....

[00000000000000000000000..]

Wow is all I can say and it happens every time I read you:) I am never nor will I ever be jealous of a dear poet but wow the words you push out are amazing and I wish I had just a small % of what you have but we all have a gift to show in many ways but you always show something very beautiful and I love it always:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Frieda P]

Awh you're so sweet to say Jon, thanks so much. :-)

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Smiles your very welcome:)