Can't Stand It

Can't Stand It

A Chapter by Ethan Paz
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How can I sum up my feelings right now, Oh yeah: confused!

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Soul is racing

I can't stand it!

Natures are clashing

My all is cringing.

 

Temptations all around

I can't think normally.

My heart is there

My heart is here.

I don't wanna do what I oughta do

But I don't wanna do what I know

I should not do.

 

My heat is aching;

Stress flowing through my veins.

Cardiac arrest . . . I can feel it coming

Trapped in metal bars by myself

I talk to myself

And

I am my greatest enemy.



© 2010 Ethan Paz


Author's Note

Ethan Paz
Free style write here. No rhyme. Ignore grammatical errors.

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I love this poem, I love the story in it and the flow. Very good write. Keep it up :)

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Ethan Paz
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Iron River, MI



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