Suffocation

more of a rant than anything

endless banter

 

voices refuse to mute

 

closing walls

 

tedious confrontation

 

god.. will you please SHUT UP!

 

move.. move.. they say...

 

but where am i to go?

 

boredom becomes my couch

 

my soul trapped

 

but okay..

 

it's okay...

 

it's always OKAY!

 

ha!

 

it's never f*****g okay

 

never how you imagine it

 

never how they say it will be

 

SHUT UP!

 

now stop

 

calm

 

two seconds of peace

 

then right back at it

 

a thousand questions unanswered

 

a thousand unwanted opinions

 

it's my life... MINE...

 

for me to say...

 

not you...

 

it's sad you think i care what's on your tongue

 

calm....

 

breathe....

 

it has me on the run...

 

with nowhere to run

 

locked away within my mind

 

snug white jacket of comfort

 

shhhhhhhhhhhhh

 

Reviews

[The Spaniard]

I love when you just let your mind go free. Such passion pours out. excellent!

[Initium]

I am not quite sure what to say, as a critic, but I do like it.

[Raven Malak]

Truly a rant. One of Control not wanting to let you be Free. Beating you down, wanting it all. Just a small moments rest, then back to the beating of life.

I liked it a lot.