POETRY DELIGHT

My poetry flows in a staggering type motion.  

I guess you can say we call it poetry in motion.

I get the emotions of my poetry’s flow, 

and then I c**k it. 

I then set fire to the stem and watch it 

blast off like a rocket.

Entering space and all the dimensional

realms in mind 

mentally, physically, sexually, its all intertwined.

I have a natural flow of Poetry Mojo stamina,

I have no need for the keeping me going 

Poetry Viagra.

Poetry is an art, from my heart,

gaining momentum from my mind’s arch. 

All we need is a little inspiration to rekindle the spark.

My mind’s full potential has encased itself in a tight cocoon. 

I let it take metamorphosis within, 

and I pierce it with life’s harpoon.

My cocoon then opens and out a cloud of smoke will fly, 

but when the smoke all clears 

we have a beautiful butterfly.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Poetry is an art, from my heart,

gaining momentum from my mind’s arch.

All we need is a little inspiration to rekindle the spark.




My mind’s full potential has encased itself in a tight cocoon.

I let it take metamorphosis within,

and I pierce it with life’s harpoon."
All wonderful lines to quote and admire. You have done a great job on defining poetry and what it means to you and the reader. It flows from the heart , drowns in thoughts and survives in others . You are maturing in your writes with great leaps and bounds...Pen on dear firend...:)

[kelvin]

Thank you for those kind words you speak here my friend it always good to hear from you and your thoughts of wisdom thank you again.

[Sami Khalil]

Always a pleasure... You are welcome...:)

[Sami Khalil]

Went into my faves...:)

[kelvin]

Well thank you my friend i didn't expect that.

[Sami Khalil]

You deserve it...:)

[Sami Khalil]

Merci Boucou...:)

[kelvin]

Your welcome and thank you

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Taino]

This poem is amazing! The way you used the butterfly and its stages to express the creative process involed in writing poetry is incredible!

[DIVYA]

I love the way you are caught up in inspiration. There's nothing more magical than poetry arising from an inspired soul. Appreciated so much Kelvin.

[kelvin]

Thank you for your kind words

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wonderful metaphors...there are many elements that fuel our poetry...and we hope the tank never empties...
j.

[Angi]

Ha! I love the mojo flowing through this piece. Poetic Viagra, indeed! Angi~

[kelvin]

Haha Thank you very much I'm glad you like it.

[ms. barrie]

My mind’s full potential has encased itself in a tight cocoon.
I let it take metamorphosis within,
and I pierce it with life’s harpoon.

My cocoon then opens and out a cloud of smoke will fly,
but when the smoke all clears
we have a beautiful butterfly.


exquisite imagery as well as metaphors...the fluidity...is like whip cream on top of a key lime pie. brilliantly penned, kelvin...thanks for sharing!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Well, I think that you have put many of the main dimensions of your whole being in to this expression and great use of vocabulary here I felt, very well done!

[kelvin]

Thank you very much I appreciate it.

[Marie]

Funny and insightful...I like the concept of your poem working its way from a cocoon into a beautiful butterfly.

[kelvin]

Thank you Miss Marie glad you like that about it.

[Rogue]

I love the ending to this one. I truly do think you walk a fine line between poet and spoken word artist. You can take your pieces either way. They both read quietly and sound good out loud.

A good piece. :)

[kelvin]

Thank you very much for you kind words here I appreciate it and its good we as writers and poets or whatever we want to be called can support each other.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Poetry Viagra!!!

:)

[kelvin]

hahaha it works like the other Viagra it keeps your poetry up hahaha.