A Star Not Far Away

A Star Not Far Away

A Poem by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Dream

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I painted my dream on my wall
and everytime I open my eyes,
I see a star not that far away...

© 2016 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Short, sweet and worthwhile words dear Dhaye. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gentle, tender, filled with dreamy hope. So lovely. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely expressive write , short and to the point.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Moon.
This is so profoundly beautiful, filled with longing and light. I can sense the dream, and the sky awakening within it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the read and review, sir.
Our dreams can only be within our reach once we move towards them.

Nice one hon.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you, sir.

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Added on December 13, 2016
Last Updated on December 13, 2016
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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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